River goblins (original poetry) [Day 3]

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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River goblins

River goblins

This is where they exist cold and hidden
the goblins on the riverbank,
manifestation of affliction
for its immortal stillness.

Their attenuated voices are felt when walking,
Incorporeal and angry they had to scream.
Silence!
years of waiting.

For their return, they offer hidden treasures
With delivery conditions,
Two seek them, one returns.
Greed is the smile of perfidy.

Mortals in temptation risk their existence
For an ephemeral truth, gold or silver?
splinters of the nature of agony,
what is worth is the glory of the entelechy.

Photographs taken by the author, Panasonic Lumix digital camera DMC-LS80

Duendes de río

Aquí es donde existen fríos y escondidos
los duendes en la orilla del río,
manifestación de aflicción
por su quietud inmortal.

Sus voces atenuadas se sienten al caminar,
incorpóreo y enojado tuvieron que gritar.
¡Silencio!
años de espera.

Para su regreso, ofrecen tesoros escondidos
con condiciones de entrega,
dos los buscan, uno vuelve.
La avaricia es la sonrisa de la perfidia.

Los mortales en tentación arriesgan su existencia
por una verdad efímera, ¿oro o plata?
astillas de la naturaleza agónica,
lo que vale es la gloria de la entelequia.

Reading notes: Beginner
Original by @corderosiete

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I find this poem dedicated to the river goblins charming and the photos are great. Congratulations, @corderosiete.

Thank you.

Nice piece. Looks like you took these pictures yourself.

For an ephemeral truth, gold or silver?

I'm feeling this line. Can truth really be ephemeral?

Hello @onenecha, Yes, the pictures were taken by me.
Reality can change at a certain time. The truth of today can be refuted tomorrow. Greetings friend.

Some great scribing, cordero:)

Thank you

Nice,vote back

Sencillamente espectaclar @corderosiete, me gusta en enfoque reflexivo de tu escritra. Genial amigo, volveré por la siguiente.

Gracias amiga. Saludos.

beautiful photos and words that flow like water from the mouth of these rivers, my friend.

always appreciate the poetic journeys your words take me on, thank you for sharing, @corderosiete.