Solemn desert [Day 13]

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Solemn desert

  Solemn desert

Desert, I see
          like the Cosmos
cries over the shoulder blades
with sores.

            Sunny day
Ocher reflection,
           Dry breeze
Impetus of particles

Shady nights
          Icy wind
Vote of the gods
          For your peace of mind

 Sand tree
           Dried fruit.
Fights,
Persists,
Exists.  


Poetry written for (100 Day Poetry Challenge) organized by @d-pend made for Steemit School

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Original by @corderosiete

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[Day 13/100]

I invite you to read the poems:
Day 1 sea-of-forgetfulness
Day 2 traditional-fishermen
Day 3 river-goblins
Day 4 persistence-mirror
Day 5 in-the-apse
Day 6 sea-mermaid
Day 7 shore-fisherman
Day 8 my-wild-guitar
Day 9 desolation
Day 10 desolation II
Day 11 anthem-to-the-sea

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Está hermoso tu poema amigo. Exitos!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Gracias amiga. Saludos.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Rich sensorial images inspired by the desert, @corderosiete. Good luck!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thanks @maryncabrera. Praying that luck would smile.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Beauty style of poetry today. Love it.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Thanks friend.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                I love the the structure of your poetry
                And like always, very good, keep steeming mate.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Thanks friend. and Congratulations for the well-deserved triumph.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Friend, I did not answer your comment because it was hidden. You must have a virus. Grateful for your words. Greetings.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          So nice and you achieved some great rhythm in this free verse as well:)

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Your words are music to my ears.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              I really like how you imagine about sand movement on the desert. Beautiful.

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Thanks, yes, pure imagination.

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  The desert turns out to be a 'cold' place.

                                  Great entry into the 100 Days Poetry Challenge

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Thank you

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