In the sky, the gods
doodle frozen fire trails
above the airport.
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Part of Steel Waterfall – 108 Modern Haikus and Tankas, which I'm publishing for the first time, on Steemit.
© C.S.Begu, 2017, All Rights Reserved
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Wonderful!
Can I make a small suggestion? Feel free to ignore. Tanka and haiku don't have plural forms, so 1 haiku/tanka and 108 haiku/tanka would be more correct. I've been told both forms can be correct when used in English, depending on what dictionary you cite, but us translators usually favor retaining the no plural form of the words. Just an idea. :)
Anyway, I like it. I am following you now to see more.
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Thanks @dbooster, that's a very valuable suggestion. I will change it. I'll put in more regularly, I have still a lot to go until 108. Here's an earlier one containing links to previous ones as well.
Cheers
https://steemit.com/poetry/@csbegu/anxiety-disorder-or-steel-waterfall-cycle-20
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It is a nice project to have..thanks too @csbegu
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