Coming to terms with the limited helpfulness of this poem [Day 9]

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Coming to terms with
the limited helpfulness of this poem

.original poetry & images.


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    If only this poem
Could wash my dishes

Instead of giving me
      A grim tattoo.

A barcode
     For a product
          In the estimation
               Of corporate hierophants
               Ecstatic with the fumes of profits

The girders of their meeting rooms
Are my dendrites & invisible sighs,

And also, my "laugh-until-I-cries."

                               If only this poem
Could make me two-dimensional

Instead of a rollicking paper plane.

Then I would become the glitched avatar
                 Seen by compatriots & travelers

                   (Fickle image - crazed minotaur
                and a bolt of silk tumbling,
            Tumbling, down the stairs
       Of this insubordinate
   Beast poem & daughter
To the carrot light
Of dusk.)

If only this poem
Would say what it really feels

                Instead of allowing me
To check it out from the library
And magnify feverishly the margin notes
Scribbled by some poor soul come before:

            To come to nothing wholly tangible
But the enjoyment of the tenuous
    And the willingness
        To wash my own dishes.

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Written by
@d-pend
3/15/18

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Photos taken with
iPhone 5 & edited.

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Welcome to Writer's Block 101: finding inspiration in the christ figure painted in grease on your dirty plates with your host, Dan-Pen!

and, more seriously, enjoyed seeing your more literal channeling of the mundane into the poetic, a nice extension of what you've advocated a few times in class now in relation to having difficulty finding inspiration.

I had an audible laugh escape me at these lines:

If only this poem
Could make me two-dimensional /
Instead of a rollicking paper plane.

The push and pull of the esoteric, mythic and sacred next to the corporate and status quo was very interesting, maybe more so because it was framed by the now told story of the unwashed dishes - hoping that your bolt of silk lent you a silver string to find your way back.

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Alas, a poem is only ever just a poem, despite how invincible and adrenalised we may feel in the process of constructing it. "Corporate hierophants" is a great phrase, and also a new word to add to my vocabulary, for which I thank you.

If only this poem
Would say what it really feels

I love the variation in your poetry @d-pend. This is what motivates me to write and go beyond my limit. This poem contains some themes I have been dealing with and I am glad you have not sold out.

  • danger of greed
  • humbleness
  • communication

In one word, "The Word became flesh..."

Thanks for showing proof of work (dish sponge) LOL.

The slanting appearance with the zig zag like pattern to this beautiful rendition, it's not teretestial, there is a touch of magic here
I'm still gullping

My first expression should be "Grandeur!" But that would be a statement of obvious facts.

The simplicity of the poem is balanced by its deep down meaning.

@d-pend has captured, in quite a secretive manner, details of a thinking mind.

The uniqueness of the poem is evident when one has to sit and wonder why we bother "Coming to terms with the limited helpfulness of this poem"

And all through my munching of this literary delicacy no words got me hungry for more like these :IMG_20180316_023037_805.JPG

This is a poem!

Indeed, if only poems would wash the dishes
than this poetess, would be granted her dearest wish
swish, swish, swish

Say those lines out loud ... I'm telling you, it is a lot of fun:)

A very relatable write from my point of view. I enjoyed muchly.

Dawg ur still using those same dish sponges? Is that a mama-pend fave? Haha I liked this post a lot. I’ll bust out my dictionary later to figure out more of what it’s saying. One love irie kitch monster

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100% upvote for the smiley sponge! :)

Wow! This is beautiful. I am always in awe reading your poetry.

ah, even if he does not
but the stanza is classy
he belongs to people fall in love

poetry always accompany the heart
convey honesty with love
he embraced a dry soul
wetting the barren heart

lets him down even if there is none
like an invisible love

thank @d-pend

@d-pend, Such a impressive poem of Coming to terms with the limited helpfulness of this poem. It touch my heart soul deeply. Gorgeous pattern style most attractively and touch my heart soul deeply. Nice using vocabulary and compare correct position. Top class poem introduction.

@d-pend, always subliminal. This cracked me

If only this poem
Could make me two-dimensional

It's deep. Nice formatting..The styling is a top-notch skill..We keep learning

Loved your opening line! I think we can all relate to this great poem :)

When I see your pict, I remember my routine when I'm stuck and do not have an ideas for my post. I always washes my dishes. It's works for me!

Nicely done beautifully written so nice to read this poem :D

I love the rhythm and structure of your poem.
You never seize to amaze me

Great poem on the day 9 superb work

Thanks a lot for the funny lines @d-pend ;-)

I am sure contest is going well and everyone looks so passionate about it <3

To come to nothing wholly tangible
But the enjoyment of the tenuous
And the willingness
To wash my own dishes.

Great work, Sucsesfuly for your @d-pend

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Carrots and minotaurs huh LOL ;) god I need to get my poems to clean my place it is a mess and that sweater reminds me of 1983 :P