Holo-blooms

in poetry •  6 years ago 

Holo-blooms

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original poetry
by @d-pend
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with photos
by angela6331,
tatasz, and newcastlemale.


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Holo-blooms


Flux of bloomèd clover,
iris-arced bosom of hues.
Sunshine, periwinkle, fuchsia,
lush-midriff of flow'ring news.

Self-ghast, buoyant miscreant
of greys which melt with green.
Bland e'er-perfect, hypnotized
life felt: yet ne'er seen.

Praise the simple impotence
of life in frigid forms!
This body, naught but spirit dust:
the heartly home of worms.

Strewn the crystal tears or seeds
which sow bright worlds anew.
Meander through the labyrinth hence—
Sweet vaster swirls to view.


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Written by
@d-pend
10/2/18
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Photos by

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"Glorious Wildflowers" by angela6331
"Galaxy" by tatasz
"Daisies" by newcastlemale


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  ·  6 years ago (edited)

Beautiful. The very idea of this kind of beauty being nothing compared with that which could be seen through cosmic eyes, beyond this "home of worms" is overwhelming.

We want to think that the earthly of vision is as plentiful as it can get. And maybe it is for those who never stopped to contemplate a flower, let alone get a sniff of it.
I liked how you framed the poem with images of colors, darkness and then more light. The transition from life to death to something else, hopefully better

Strewn the crystal tears or seeds
which sow bright worlds anew.

Crying over the dead, other than a catharsis necessary to balance our chemistry is ultimately pointless, and yet, here it can be seen as the watering of the path to a flourishing, yet scary transition.

Dear @d-pend sir!
Beautiful collection of blooming flowers. Although flowers are blooming for a few days, even then in a short time the flowers are realized in aesthetic sense. Human life too is brittle, it is 1 day to be found in the soil, so that we do some work from which people remember us forever. This is probably the summary of your poem.
For the past few days, due to update of fork20, it was unable to reply. Because of which you could not retort your post. I apologize for this. Still the problem remains but something looks normal.

Hi @certain, good to hear from you again! I just delegated you 50 SP in hopes it will help your HF20 woes. You had a great insight in this comment. Yes, life in its myriad forms are beautiful, yet still impotent/frigid without the warmth of something which transcends form.

Dear @d-pend sir!
I have no word to explain my happiness as well as about your gratitude.
You are such a Godfather for newcomer steemers.
Thanks & regards

Praise the simple impotence
of life in frigid forms!
This body, naught but spirit dust:
the heartly home of worms.

Favorite stanza! We're all just "food for worms" at the end of the day and yet there's something soothing about that idea as you present it in this stanza.

Thank you for being here for me, so I can be here for you.
Enjoy your day and stay creative!
Botty loves you. <3

Very good form and a good message as well.

I appreciate that @onezania. I find myself writing more and more verse-like poetry these days. As a musician, how the syllables flow and rhyme has a hypnotic effect that I enjoy. I've still written more free poetry than verse over the years but it's growing on me!

You have written so beautiful poetry with beautiful photography. Thank you very much Sir.

Great poerty!
(I have new drawings. Would be great if you take a look at them;)

You always amazed me @d-pend with webbing of words....nice beautiful lines👍

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Thank you my friend, glad you enjoyed :-)

Good to see you in new avtar...the profile pic is completelly changed👍

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Quite beautiful and bright for you ;)

Impotent but also frigid eh?

Nice one.

Hey, thanks @jeezzle. Cool seeing you 'round these parts :-D

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