The bottomless well
original poetryEmpty prism filled
With clear rain.
.
I could not decipher
Its tongue of wind.
.
In monochromatic silent thought
The impression of a distant catastrophe:
Somewhere the village succumbed to lava,
Somewhere, throes of crisis rang.
.
I could not hear
Its scream of flames.
With a ghost rope,
.
Flecks of luminescence
That blister my hands
Through toilsome hours.
.
Pulling, peeling the ectoplasmic cord—
I must drink deep from the spirit well.
Someday I will find the sweet libation.
Then, I will rest my weary hands.
.
Through that cold delirium
So parched by lunar ice,
An ebullient breeze flew.
Wow i can see beautiful chaos in this poem, the way the mood looks tensed and yet gentle and serene is such a lovely thing.
I must drink deep from the spirit well.
Someday I will find the sweet libation.
Then, I will rest my weary hands
This stanza is so awesome.your use of words are splendid.
Beautiful poem @D-pend
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Thank you my friend @josediccus, you have keen discernment. I appreciate your support and feedback!!
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Of course buddy @d-pend your works are very good, i really love them all. I will keep checking them out, and thanks for your suport too
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The drums played Swan Song and the Avalanche Sonata. The silence of the flooscent cables dominated the ghosts in the spirit of your hand rope. The poet's poet shines in the darkness of the mont Everest - exellent @d-pend tip! 0.1
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Thank you @dobartim!
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Hi @d-pend! @dobartim is sending you 0.1 SBD tip and @tipU upvote :)
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You are always welcome my friend @d-pend tip! 0.1
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Quality.
My favorite parts:
"Empty prism
filled With clear rain"
and
"I could not decipher
Its tongue of wind"
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Thank you @direwolf :) Have a great day!
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Thank you. You're one of the gems on Steemit when it comes to original content.
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Your poems are really good @d-pend. They inspire me in my own work. Thanks for sharing :)
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Thank you and I'm glad to hear it! Keep creating :)
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Thank you for a great poem. Very meaningfull and even if you didn't post the photos it would still have much meaning.
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You're welcome, I appreciate you stopping by and leaving a comment!
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Thanks for great work @d-pend your poem is really good,nice sharing
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Nice poem friend
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Postingan yang sangat menarik. Salam sukses @bustamam
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extraordinary photo @d-pend .thanks for sharing.
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Hi @d-pend! @dobartim is sending you 0.1 SBD tip and @tipU upvote :)
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Sounds like a journey into the mind of a mad genius
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great work! adore this picture too
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What a lovely poem of true expression. You never cease to amaze me @d-pend!!!
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