We, transpiring

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

We, transpiring

original poetry


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The spires and rudiments that build themselves
From a mind into a mind self-cognizing.

The chance flicker during daydream
That sets bodies as trophies on a mantelpiece.

Eye into an eye, drowning in repetitive impulse
That speaks to itself, writing variations on a theme.

Soul out of soul that searches itself
In curvaceous galaxies.

Mouth that eats not,
Hands peeling back to bone.

Skin under skin that shields treasure,
Hidden in wait in a grave of its own fashioning.

Waves of moving sand flung
In a toss that lasts one billion crore years

Each particle a tiny heart:

Each heart, a tiny world.

The filaments of life that spiral themselves
Like singing nebula through the aetheric ocean.


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Notes


One of the great beauties of poetry is its ability to utilize all of the recognized grammatical and structural conventions of the formal written language, plus a potentially infinite amount of novel combinations which would be considered "incorrect" in prose. A common poetic practice is using sentence fragments, as seen in this poem. Many of the couplets are only subjects without predicate. Yet there is still movement, action—substance becoming self-aware.

I am something
happening to the Universe.
My body: a verb.

Beyond the fluctuating haze and clarity of consciousness that parade through our lives in endless procession, may we recall that we are identical with all that we perceive. That there is no getting out of any of this, without going into it with great aplomb. And that is something of a task never finished.

Wholeness,
@d-pend


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Written by
@d-pend
2/15/18
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1 ::: "Outer space" by SymmetryBox
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2 ::: "Escher" by Calimer00
3 ::: "Twister Lobby" by Kuren
4 ::: "Space and particles 4" by JanRobbe

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Writer who has changed my life,
Your voice I have never heard,
Your face is unknown,
... Our hands have not narrowed
... In the cordial greeting of two friends.
I do not know where you live, nor how old you are,
I only know that your words I have read
And with them daily you come
To fill the void of my broken heart
... For so many years that you already have.
Today I leave this phrase tender,
for the teachings you have left in my life.
@d-pend

Wow this is amazing, I mean your use of refrains in the verse.

Each particle a tiny heart:
Each heart, a tiny world.

This lines are intriguing I mean it gives a whole lot of thrilling poetic effect like an effort to really drive home the use of metaphor here.

As usual your use of words are amazing and this one is sharp and witty, there seem to be no metric arrangement or rhymes but rhythmically you nailed this to a standstill. It's beautiful

I miss you Dsound tracks though, It would be Heavenly to listen to this one on a sound

The best of the best you are

I never get tired of these, though I don't have much else substantive to add! Always love the image selection.

Dear Daniel, with the great tragedy (& criminal waste of potential) that happened, yesterday, near my apartment —FL high school shooting— it’s good to return to poetry and meditate upon our connectedness to one another, our world and Existence.

If we lived with this expanded consciousness, I am sure we would not permit ourselves such murderous folly.

Thank you, for reminding us of our larger allegiances 🙏🏼

I have said it infinite times that i am always a huge fan of your poetry and the selection of the wording you use in your couplets My Friend ♡

I just love these wonderful lines Wow!

Skin under skin that shields treasure,
Hidden in wait in a grave of its own fashioning.

Such a composed way to deliver a very deep message to your readers, massive respect my spirtual brother @d-pend :-) :-)

You compose words with a great deal of intelligence and complexity. There are many, many layers to this piece and they seem to unfold and build on each other. Bravo.

Soul out of soul that searches itself
In curvaceous galaxies.

Great line that works in poetry but not prose. To me poetry is a song that only the writer can really hear. I like to write poems when I feel something or have some quiet time but your poems come everyday.

I am glad that we are connected.

I couldn't easily catch what a crore year refers to.

One more comment. I got a chance to listen to "CODENAME". It rocks in a 90s industrial fashion... yet true to the lyrics.

To me poetry is a song that only the writer can really hear.

And even then, only ever so softly.

A crore is ten million, usually used with Indian rupees (equivalent to one hundred lakh which are one hundred thousand each.) So a billion crore would be ten quadrillion.

Thanks for checking out the recording. I thought it was really interesting how that one turned out. Rusty and I pretty much give each other full creative reign over our part of the collab, so we end up with some dynamic results :-)

Have a great day @mineopoly

The images really set a good feel for the prose.

Each heart, a tiny world.

I lingered longest on the concept of a body being a verb. Heavy.

poetry always goes outside the borders and laws.
when we can't express feelings in prose - poetry can help.
and there is no matter if all grammatical and lexical rules are followed in it, poetry doesn't require any of them, but it is still very understandable because its perception happens from heart to heart.

You're very productive now, publish new poems very often, cosmic channel works fine for you)
I wonder how many "kids" (poems) do you already have?
don't you think of publishing it in a printed book?
though blockchain is a specific book too-)

That's a very soulful one. There are so many hidden treasures. I love Each particle a tiny heart; and each Heart a tiny world; my way of interpretation is That we all have a world of our own stored within us and then we all merge together in this cosmos and create a grand illusion.

Poetry written in good flow

Awesome poem dear Danial

Thank you! Beautiful <3

It’s nice, I liked it!

Eye into an eye, drowning in repetitive impulse
That speaks to itself, writing variations on a theme.

Love this couplets!

Though I am not a native speaker and sometimes find it a bit difficult to understand some world yet Poetry is my craze. I have tried to write many things in English language and it had been such a fun. Thank you so much for posting such a beautiful poetry.

@d-pend, Wow.....That's really creative word using. Amazing thoughts indeed. Your thoughts expand my heart soul anytime and sorry for the delay comment. I need to get lot time to understanding better your creativity. Extra ordinary sentence fragments using; it's amazing. Ready to go deeply meditation via your poetry. Excellent note explained and heart attraction digital arts always giving to delightful to your blog. These are wondering. Thanks to inspiration.

Very special post I love poetry and zajal thanks for sharing

a poem contains a profound meaning for the author, although sometimes a reader is difficult to translate the meaning, the verses and verses are meaningful, I love the poetry

What a wonderful poetry my friend it's so sensitive!!

poetry is a word of heart, poetry is One of the great beauty of its ability to exploit all the grammatical and structural conventions recognized from the formal writing language is very true !! poetry and novel like a close friend. not many people can express the heart in ink, because the poetry of hearts for the heart that melk each other ........... your poetry is meaningful and beautiful, I like and hate every stanza that I read touching the heart
Thanks for post a very good @d-pend

Very good poetry friend
I really like the poems you post in your blog

wow

Every heart, a tiny world, is the best I've heard lately. Thank you .

Very impressive choice of words.
The only reason why you experience life and aliveness is because you are conscious. If you are unconscious, you do not know whether you are alive or dead. If you are in deep sleep, you are alive but you do not know it.Expanding the sensory boundaries in such a way that if you sit here, the entire universe is a part of yourself – this is yoga; this is raising consciousness.-sadhguru

I'm always looking forward to read what you write every single day. I write myself and I do hope to keep improving and maybe one day write stuff worth reading.

Very cool @d-pend, a very touching words. If we read and understand the words you write like a real life. That's what makes me always inspired and more excited to write a poem. Because your words can always be a motivation. I also just posted a poem. About the beauty of the moon. Thanks for sharing a word that always touches my soul. Greetings and wish you a wonderful day... :)

Your poetry is different from the regular poetry i see. I love your choice of words.

Amazing poetry as always.

You always post after I sleep. That’s why I am missing some of your posts. I woke up by chance today and checked.

The photos that u used today are eye catching. I loved the last one the most.

The last paragraph is amazing. Only a few can understand it but the way u wrote it with italics and bold at the perfect places is what i really liked ! Blows the reader’s mind.

Awesome work 👏🏻
Keep it up :)

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very nice pictur

You have gat an amazing gift here in poems
I love your poetry skill
I like this poem especially this line

"Soul out of soul that searches itself
In curvaceous galaxies"

firstly your photography is nice and second you sharing a nice post...i impressed and waiting for your next post

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Your poetry is very impressive
I liked most it these Lines... :)

Eye into an eye, drowning in repetitive impulse
That speaks to itself, writing variations on a theme

House in the Picture is so scary....!!

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Beautiful poems remember always in the heart

I like this line,

That sets bodies as trophies on a mantelpiece.

but...

There is something else in this line.... As if I'm watching... Forensic files...

I hope I'm not right... It chills me to the bone...

Or it's just about heavenly body(ies)...

This was beautiful. I truly believe that the language of poetry is the purest template of expression. The language we use on a daily basis is linear with so many missing pieces. The language of poetry moves in all directions, with layers, folding into itself then expanding... all the while bringing a message. Sometimes a message of intentions, and sometimes a message unknown to the writer itself, yet fully known to the listener. Thank you for sharing. 🙏🏻