snowflakes in summer

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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You were a snowflake in summer,
Swirling, awe in such a wonder,
Rarest incident ive seen,
From the scourging pain I've been.

Astonished by the first fall,
Building me an unfathomed wall
Lit by a single incinerate,
Yes, it was fiery and I was inconsiderate.

I was moved from my serenity,
Shaken but it was a clarity,
Annoyed but never got angry,
The freezing hands, yes it was frosty.

Slowly molten by the chill it brought,
It was a risk to adjoin and caught,
But I was happier to crack the wall,
Separating me from the other hall.

Feliz Compleanos :)

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This is such a great piece! Moving, mysterious and yet so addicting.

It is rare that I can't find anything to comment about this post as you were able to fill the rhymes, the words and all other elements in a poem. Great job!

Thank you @valerie15 . I still have a lot of thi gs to improve but I really appreciate that :)