"SteemitSchoolPoetry 100 Day Challenge"[ I'm Silent Because I Want You to Stay Comfortable] (Day 2)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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You are too nice
Until I can no longer speak the best word that can describe you
You are too perfect
Until I can not afford to go any further to dream
You are too great
Until my steps just keep leaving you and I can see you from behind
You're too far away
That's why I'm silent

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Silence is my way of looking after you
Because I know keeping is for someone to stay comfortable is not easy

I'm silent because I want you to stay comfortable

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thank you @ d-pend who has held a 100 day poetry contest, good luck to all steemitschool members who have participated in this contest.

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Good job my boss :-)

Thanks you buddy

Bereh puisi gata rakan @daniel17

Thanks you @novalsyahputra

Good job friends
Beautiful poetry, I still have a lot to learn about poetry.
you write it with feelings. thank you

I liked how you repeated the word 'silent'. It made the power of what you were saying come out of the poem.