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steemsearch (37) · 7 years ago

This is a great poem, one of the best I have seen on Steemit. You should definitely write more poetry and publish it here. It might take some time, but i think you could be really successful doing so

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dantanner (48) · 7 years ago

@steemsearch Thank you! I do have plenty of posts planned, varied in their content, and I never release anything I do not consider to be (within reason) worthy of reading. I'm happy you enjoyed it, and I hope you are a regular customer. :)

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marie-jay (61) · 7 years ago

Sounds like Poe to me. Great read!

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dantanner (48) · 7 years ago

That is an immense compliment! Although Poe himself was a maniac, he was a literary genius and that's what I'm going to assume you were referencing - Thank you!

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aseneca (45) · 7 years ago

A nice poem. Nonetheless, i think you should work on your visualization. A more picturesque approach can help define the peripherals of your poem and give the reader a more vivid scenery. But still, wonderful work. I expect to see more of this, perhaps better.

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dantanner (48) · 7 years ago

I appreciate your honesty. I wrote this poem a long while ago (6-7 years), and like to think that my writing has improved since. I am a believer in 'less is more' when writing, the reader (usually) will conjure a scene in order to fill the ambiguity left by the writer. In this particular poem, it was an ill-begotten attempt at designing the atmosphere surrounding this peak. The next three poems I am to release are far more metaphorical, complex, and offer vivid imigary for the reader - I think. :)

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crowbarmama (60) · 7 years ago

https://discord.gg/9TV3U6

The link above is an invitation to join a Discord channel called Isle of Write. They have all types of writers including poets, songwriters, fiction & non and more. I believe your work would be well-received there!

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dantanner (48) · 7 years ago

I must apologise (again), this link has expired since. I appreciate the invitation, would it be easier to ask one of the mediators of the channel to add me instead? As I may, once again, miss the timeout. :)

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