Charge to my rescue
For I'm phasing out of emotions
I hear your sound approaching in distant
like footsteps from the hollowed hallway
The tingling sensation of your voice
Arouses my subconscious
Bring me to life
I'm anticipating
like the rising morning sun your presence arrays a red carpet
I crave for you to walk into my heart
Bathe me in your warmth once again
Stay with me and never let me go
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Great poem mate. I can feel the passion for your lady singing out in these words
Really nice :-)
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What a multifacet poem, could go for love, when troubled, a hero, anyone who needs help and yearning for something.
In this case, I think it's a girl. Yes, it is.
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I'm glad you see multiple views to it. In my view it is purely a love poetry.
Thanks buddy
Cheers
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To be honest, at the first instance of reading the poem i felt lost but going through it over again, i was able to get a deep understanding of it.
Bravo @dante31
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I honesty thought this was a straight forward poem.
Thanks buddy
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Awwwwwww this is cute.... Should i call you a lover boy or a passionate poet?
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@tomboy you can call me both 😉
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Hmmn
This is a bit confusing to non poets like us. ❤
Could mean a lot of things.
Really beautiful
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Thank you Juliet Isreal.
I'm glad you found it beautiful
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"I crave for you to walk into my heart"
That's romantic 😁
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It's a wonderful feeling you know
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Bath me in your warmth once again. Really interested in that "once again "To me, I view it in a scenario whereby a guy lost his lover and he kinda imagine her or wanting her back, something like that. Others might see it in a different view.
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Beautiful words... I kind of interpret it differently... a longing maybe
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Yeah, @yidneth
A longing
A yearning 😊
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More great poetry, this is true view into you. On the 2nd to last line, the e has been missed off bathe 😃 - Keep writing and thank you
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As always I appreciate the correction. edited
Thanks @planetauto
Cheers
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