The Idiot of Love - A Poem

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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I have neglected myself

Since I started to love you.

Because my world,

and my heart revolves around you.


I find it difficult

Because you love us both.

You will not hear

any complaint from my lips.


Because of love, I learned to endure.

Because of love, I gave it completely.

My heart is not hoping

anymore for love returned.


Because of love I gave in to your whims.

Because of love,

my heart is crying now.


Good friends, I will not listen to all your advice.

I shall follow my heart...

Because I love her completely.



"I came to rise as wounded dolphin."

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      ·  7 years ago 

    nice post bro big boost from bitcoin montana from the bitcoin company folowing you aswel

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Hey, thanks a lot! I am not posting poems usually but sometimes
    they spark out of my mind.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      So bittersweet. I really like it!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Thank you!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        nice poem my friend, but i guess heart is a male not a female so

        Because I love her completely.

        it should be like that because i love him completely and you are looking discouraged to me my friend especially with these words.

        My heart is not hoping
        anymore for love returned.

        i think we should never leave the hand of hope because hope is the start of every success.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        You have a good eye, my friend. I meant the narrator as part of a love triangle or something like that...

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          ·  7 years ago 

        What a beautiful poem!! Let me know if you want to participate in out freewrite challenge and I will include you on the list of freewriters and drop the prompt ever so often. Here is today's if you like to play with us. https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-13-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-crazy

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Thanks, I will drop by soon!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          What a splendid poem sir it's brialliant

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            ·  7 years ago 

          nice post bro big boost from bitcoin montana from the bitcoin company folowing you aswel i love you........................

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Nice one buddy liked it

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          Love is pizza and you have a good appetite @darthnava
          Nothing else matters.

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          This poem reminds of the song Saving All My Love for You. Ha ha

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Wow...nice and lovely poem...
            Wel done @darthanava my dear friend...
            Upvoted...
            Cheers~~~~

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                ·  7 years ago 

              you feel and do this when you are in true love.

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Nice. Thank you.

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Lovelyyyy😍😍😍

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Lovely Poem.

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      That's a great poem i have read in recent times :)

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        beautiful dil!

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                            ·  7 years ago 

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                              ·  7 years ago 

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