Poem "Mirror"

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Hi Steemers ..
How are you today, hopefully stay healthy in carrying out activities activities as usual, hopefully we are always in good condition every time

Mirror
Works DESSY _ @deesy

Imagine myself as I look in the mirror
Like the same person on different sides
Imagine describing my entire motion
Like a pair in the split second

Clear glass displays stainless results
Cracked glass displays dullness
Dirty glass describes many stains
Glass broke without describing anything

Reflecting on the flaws
Reflected self reflected for future improvement
Reflecting on past mistakes
Reflect look selfish this self

Glanced at the glass for a moment to self-immersion
Looking glass looking at the shadows
Glancing at the glass corrected the error
Look at the glass remembering yourself against things that have not been done

Lhokseumawe 05 June 2018

So the writing of this poem I present and the author wants to know what Steemers think after reading poetry
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Hi Steemers ..
Bagaimana kabarmu hari ini, semoga tetap sehat dalam menjalankan aktifitas kegiatan seperti biasa, semoga kita selalu dalam kondisi baik setiap waktu

Cermin
Karya DESSY _ @deesy

Bayangan diriku ketika menatap cermin
Bagaikan orang yang sama pada sisi yang berbeda
Bayangkan mengambarkan seluruh gerakkan ku
Bagaikan pinang di belah dua

Kaca bening menampilkan hasil tanpa noda
Kaca retak menampilkan kekusaman
Kaca kotor menggambarkan banyak noda
Kaca pecah tanpa menggambarkan apa-apa

Bercermin membayangkan kekurangan
Berkaca diri dicermin untuk perbaikan kedepan
Bercermin terhadap kesalahan masa lalu
Berkaca lihat egois kah diri ini

Melirik kaca sejenak merapihkan diri
Memandang kaca melihat bayangan diri
Melirik kaca membetulkan kesalahan
Memandang kaca mengingat diri terhadap hal yang belum dikerjakan

Lhokseumawe 05 Juni 2018

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bagai pinang di belah doa

saya suka kalimat itu

Terimakasih telah mampir ke post saya
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Gracias por compartir, tu poema es inspirador, me recuerda un poco uno que escribí hace 35 años, me has traído gratos recuerdos, saludos desde México.

Así que recuerda el pasado
Gracias por los comentarios que me motivaron más
Saludos también desde el país de la provincia de Aceh en Indonesia