Your captivating smile made their jaw dropped
They giggled whenever you passed by
And follow you all around
Their eyes sparkle when you greeted them
And were mesmerized by your presence
The sight of you made them weak
Girls really wanted to be close to you
Even their parents have swoon and loved you
Brought cook foods and bake cakes for you
And asked you to visit them in their home
They just smiled and listened to you
Some sent letters with provocative in content
You are an old-fashioned person
And their aggressiveness were not your type
Even by the least whose lives you have touched
They were deeply sorry for your loss
As you were a guy who never turned his back
Who is willingly help anyone who is in need
The lyrics of the song suits you well
It was played in your funeral
Everyone were teary eyed
A guy who were loved so much by many
My brother, my best friend.....
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So sad to read this honestly. Just tears my eyes. Prayers for your brother.
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Thank you for the prayers Sir and for dropping by as well.
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Na touch ako, nakakaiyak naman..
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Thanks sis and for reading as well
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nice poem, msrp rn tlga gumawa ng mga tula, d2 lng aq s steemit ng start mgkron ng mtinding interest s mga tula, dti panay basa q lng e, nw pti aq involve n haha
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hahaha..nice to know that you are now interested in poetry bro. spill your heart out ;0
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Nice Post........
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Thanks a lot!
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nice .. it's dancing once i like with this bright color ..
this could be a lesson for me .. i can learn with this ..
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pgtula tlga waley ako e
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just try freewrite sis. before you know it. poet ka na rin ;)
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Nice
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Thanks a lot and for dropping by as well.
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nice but sad poem condolence for your loss. @masterwali"s comment makes no sense at all.
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Aww such a sweet poem... When did your brother died?
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18 years ago sis. He was our youngest.
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@originalworks
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Up 100 ate,.upvoted
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thanks bro.
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Loved that you celebrated his life essence! Well done. Uv and followed. Peace friend.
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Thanks you so much @platosgroove and thank you for stopping by as well. Followed you too.
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Such a sweet reminder of the brother you love and miss. Thank you for sharing this personal poem.
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Yes he is dearly missed. Thanks for dropping by.
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I'm sorry for the loss of your dear brother. This is a beautiful poem about his life and I am sure he is deeply missed.
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Thanks that you like my piece. Yes, you are right, he is deeply missed. Thanks for dropping by as well @wandrnrose7
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