FANTASY

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Standing along the shore
Raging water curling into an arched form
A submarine bolt from the blue
My hair hitched up
Feet was cemented on the ground
And was stupefied by the titanic
Looking at the surroundings
Noticed that am just alone
Was terrified and turned my heel
Ran afar from the site
Arrived in a crystal blue stream
Saw people wearing blue swim suits
Bathing in a wallowed foaming water
Was flabbergasted, and went for a dip
Closing my eyes while in water
Felt that I was down under
Carefully I opened my eyes
I was surrounded by sea creatures
I transformed into a beautiful sea-nymph
Reveled the luxury of being a queen
Suddenly, someone called my name
Shook my shoulders and am back to reality

Photo Credit: https://pixabay.com/en/fantasy-nature-beautiful-dawn-3077928/

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Sarap talaga ng nangyayari sa fantasy. gusto ko tuloy maligo ng dagat hehe

hahaha. tapos may sirenang tatangay sayo..lol

WOW, deep. so was it a relief to come back to reality or was it a let down?

hahaha.. I felt both ;) thanks for dropping by.

what a nice fantasy

Thanks you like it bro

nice poetry

Thank you that you like it

you write good poetry

Thanks Ate ;)

Nice post @diosarich
Good work, don't forget to visit to my post friend

Thanks for dropping by.

You are welcome

I am hearing the song "Its Just A Fantasy" in the background...akala ko dream mo ate.

Aha! someone's on your mind no?

Beautiful poem

Thanks sis

very nice poem!

Thanks a lot

ang ganda ng tula mo mam diosa :-)

Salamat

256% upvoted Thanks!

Thanks a lot @candyboy ;)