Legend Of Love

in poetry •  7 years ago 
  • Hey, where you went to the hidden secrets of this world, the ship has found a harbor in the heart of your love. Happiness played in the song of joyful tears, smile wiped out the negative karma from the mirror of destiny. You created the energy of naughtiness, I love you.

  • Above the clouds and below the earth, in the whole cosmos, we see traces of love. Your infidelity is seen below the surface of our rough bodies, we descend into the valley of honey, we make the future with the new movements of the magic lamp - joy is sweet when it is sincere.

  • Strong touches fall through the storm of your passion, you move the stars around my head. Chemistry seeks the power of dopamine in the storm of volcanic emotions, on the wings of lust, the passionate kisses flame the fire through a happy explosion of love.

  • The lighthouse, you leave love marks as signs of the future. The depth of your thoughts overcomes the greatest wave of enthusiasm, your hug touches the sky of my fairy tale. This story goes from heart to heart as a legend of our mystical love.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Deep in the corners of your heart you kept me
Deep inside your feelings you locked me away
Your mind is my companion
Your body is my second half

In the valley below the sea level
And the mountains above the sea level
The trail of our love is unmistakable
So is the tale of our love incomparable

You’re my dawn and twilight
Soft touches of you are very soothing
You’re my fairytale and reality
In your caresses is my comfortability

Wonderful poem from a wonderful poet , thanks for the inspiration my friend

Your words have the power of love, keep up with good work

Thanks my friend, you’ve taught us well at Steemschools. You should be credited for my improvement, we win together. Steemschools forever

We win together

Strong touches fall through the storm of your passion, you move the stars around my head.

That is, for me, the legend of love. Great post again my friend, another one. 😊

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Another strong, powerful philosophical lines of you. "We make the future with the new movements of the magic lamp - joy is sweet when it is sincere". Thanks for sharing and giving me hope for future. Upvoted, resteemed by @motherearthist

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

My creative neighbour :) didn't notice your poetry skills till now...
I like the first picture with the goosebumps too!
Best of all is we connected ~ Very HIGH Balkan energy! :)
Keep well @dobartim!

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i have not been active on your blog
but i really want to get close to get involved in what you are doing sir

the story goes heart to heart, love is in the heart i concur

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I love that you're always writing about love. It is your energy that must be spread all over, and that's how love works. Love is not taking, it is giving. And if you neglect that fact, you end up egoistic being with no real support to people around you.

That's why love is such a great thing. You can share it and you'll lose nothing. That's something to admire if you think about it deeply enough.

Awesome comment Luka, keep going

Love is just coming out of my being, every day every moment ;)

Deep rooted love that can't be felt by mere touch...

Strong touches fall through the storm of your passion, you move the stars around my head.

Most times, I'm lost for words to comment after reading your erotic poems about love.

This is really beaautiful and deep Sir.

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very good post bro

Thank you very much

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It's fun to enjoy. You write with great ability. Very beautiful my friend. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you, see you on Steem Schools

Thank you! Welcome very Pleasant my friends. Some time ago I joined Steem School, but I still confused and had to learn a lot for it. Maybe because I still new steemit.

Step by step, see you

Thank you my friends. I try to post a poetry tagged with steemschools.
https://steemit.com/life/@seha76/struggle

Nice

Omg..nice post.
I am new in steemit bro.

Nice, the best place for you is https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

Yes I am in here..
Sir can u vote in my comment please

When I see quality and your progress

Ok sir

See you

wow
very good brother @dobartim

Nice post brother

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I always love poetry by @dobartim
As we know there are four volves in heart and very astonishing thing is they can not be full at any time. If we love some one, the volum of love increased as time passes. These volves can be filled when we get our love.

Interesting, soul and spirit

great post my best friend

Thank you very much

Reading this poem once is not enough, re-reading again and then some, to really grasp the meaning and when I finally understand what it really means, clouds in my mind began to grow - and i say to myself, "I think I need to read it AGAIN!"

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So romantic

Thanks

Okey i like this post what the paragraph better good then last when we talk in reply.

For the content

I want reply with short poem, can i?

Love
Love whoe believe a love?
I? You? Us? Our?
Believe it?
Ofcourse
Love the name who gift all we neet in the world
Love when you say it? Waiting for happines and life will better

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Thanks you for attention

You are welcome

You have great ability to write ..and always you do that. Like your all post .upvoted

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nice one sir @dobartim. am a poet with similar perspective but i do not get a single upvote for the few poems i have uploaded. i will like you to mentor me to the top.

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Thanks sir
How do i join a steem school