Love Balloon

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)
  • The desire covers the field of ideas, we feel the smells of projects that come from the cosmic heart.We explore new possibilities in the dwarf consciousness, lift your strength to the next level of illusion. Feel the victory of time in the kiss of the rain, feel the victory of joy in the eyes of sorrow.

  • Clouds show signs of your body, look at me with your beautiful eyes. The visionary adventure drives the avalanche of passion, the touch raises the energy of love messages through the vibration of mysticism. This night was created for the game of chemistry, show me your marvelous movements on the imaginative polygon.

  • We fly in the snow while we cause thoughts of fire kisses, your body raises the pressure on the knees of opportunity.
    Boats surf the heads of businessmen, wealth is great for those who do not feel the ecstasy of love. I am a wealthy lover who fills the emotions of your heart.

  • We pass by the winds of change, the energy of nature transmits messages of wisdom. We drink cocktails of love with the music of angels, you are my beauty that changes my mood. We are trapped in a balloon of possibilities, love elevates us to an infinite level of perfect love.


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Just wow.

Thank you

We are trapped in a balloon of possibilities, love elevates us to an infinite level of perfect love.

There is a lot when it comes to love. Another one 😊

Love is the main power

Will always be.

¡Hola amigo poeta @dobartim! Lo felicito es una poesia bellisima, quisiera poder escribir cosas tan linda para expresar mis pensamiento, me encanto esta ultima parte, Pasamos por los vientos del cambio, la energía de la naturaleza transmite mensajes de sabiduría. Bebemos cócteles de amor con la música de los ángeles, eres mi belleza que cambia mi estado de ánimo. Estamos atrapados en un globo de posibilidades, el amor nos eleva a un nivel infinito de amor perfecto. Un fuerte abrazo desde la distancia.

Thank you for nice words, have a nice day

Gracias a ti, que Dios te siga bendiciendo con el don de la poesia, para que sigamos disfrutandolas, que tengas un bendecido dia.

See you on the top

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Wow....your a great writer! I dont think I have read any other poetry that is as visual as yours. I heard someone else say a similar comment about the black and white poem in steemschool voice chat yesterday and I whole-heartedly agree.

Thank you very much for your kind comment, see you on the top

Thanks @dobartim and with your help and others on steemit and those in steemschool.....I might just get there eventually! ♨😀

We thought sky is the limit, but with the power of knowledge and with our big love we figured out that the Universe is getting small for us. Maybe parallel universes exist and I know if they do, we doing the same thing there as we're doing here...

Poetry is way to express yourself! Love this one especially!

Love above the stars

nice poetry

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Nice piece such a great work from the author
We pass by the winds of change, the energy of nature transmits messages of wisdom. We drink cocktails of love with the music of angels, you are my beauty that changes my mood
Indeed this is a good word formation
Love it

I'm glad you like it

I'm in the discord group already. I'll pass the link to my poetry friends

Excellent choice

Of all the magic in the world, there is non as great as love. Beautiful poem from one of the best poetic writers on steemit.

Thank you very much for this nice words, see you on Steem Schools discord channel

Wow. Just yesterday we had a lesson on poetry.this is a nice piece. I really need to learn more time be able to capture passion, caption the feelings. Nice one @dobartim

This is awesome, be part of business class

Ofcourse I will join. I need to grab this opportunity you have given to us. Thanks @dobartim

Great poem especially with that picture!

Thank you very much

Boats surf the heads of businessmen, wealth is great for those who do not feel the ecstasy of love. I am a wealthy lover who fills the emotions of your heart.

This line amazing, emotions are the most precious thing what a human has. We should respect emotions.

Thak you very much, have a nice and successful day

How you play with words on your poetry, makes me fall in love over and over again. It's simply amazing!

Love your poems. Your image choices are brilliant, especially that first photo. Pinterest is a great resource.

I am very interest, i am @farrohahulfa come from madura indonesia, i am very happy look itu. Be creatif and succes good job @dobartim