We're flying along the sands of stellar steps, I feel love in a water cloud that drives the energy of passion in deep emotional turmoil. You are my strength through the weakness of perfection, I pass through the false walls of material mischief, while in your eyes I see the freedom.
We are an ether in passion, a thought that comes in all directions of celestial vibrations. We have relative knowledge and perfection and ignorance that leads us to new successes in seeking our connection with the infinite source of your love - Keeping my hand as I pass over the ocean of paradise experiences.
Love is infinite in your touches that gently fall on my heart, snow shows the way to your lips with which magic words flow. You are my inspiration in the perfect love of cosmic laws - I've never forgotten the music and art of your exciting movements - every morning you awaken new energy inside me.
Teachers go through the paths of students and lead a new school through stellar traces of perfect characters. Love is the perfect teacher of life, shows us all the relationships that are good, bad and great in the new steps of perfect travel -
Love is above all dreams our ultimate goal.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
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if the verses of poetry, can be transformed into a reality in life, then the very beautiful of this world, hand in hand and share in love makes the world more beautiful in harmony.
the verses of the word poetry would be meaningless if they were only a display and only to be read, but the verses of poetry would be beautiful if impregnated and lived in the heart, it would be more beautiful to be able to apply in themselves and live and share each other.
surely we do not expect our poetry to be lightning and storms that are only capable of destroying who is nearby, because the essence of poetry and love is the most beautiful gift in life that can make us strong in love.
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Excellent comment
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So poignant and touching, to be loved like this must truly be something.
This again, is simply amazing. The way you express youself is something I'm jealous of. Keep up the awesome writings.
This reminds me of a quote by Rumi “Love is the vital core of the soul, and of all you see, only love is infinite”.
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"Teachers go through the paths of students and lead a new school through stellar traces of perfect characters. Love is the perfect teacher of life." As a teacher, these lines give an impact in me that truly says how we love and do sacrifices for students...and that love is my perfect teacher. Thank you for sharing @dobartim
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Wow, this is deep
I could feel the love in every line and only wished it was written for me....blush
.................bemusing
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Honestly I am motivated.....thanks to you sir @dobartim. You woke the sleeping giant in me the last time you asked me to make write a poem. I sent it to you and was waiting for you to rate it. That was my first time of ever composing a poem.
Kindly go through it and advice me where you think there you should be correction. Grateful sir
https://steemit.com/poetry/@cyprianj/yes-i-can
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Love is a wonderful thing. It radiates to everyone who is tender enough to receive. Love is the perfect teacher of life, It is the base to all relationships. I must say, without love in the heart we are beings, not human beings. This is not eros I'm talking about. This is way above that.
Thank you for this lovely piece sir
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samo ljubav
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Duzi komentari, mozes vise o ljubavi da napises
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zahvaljujem na savjetu, danas sam se , kao i cesto, izrazio slikom. Ali bit ce komentara, kad bude inspiracije.
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This i beautiful, the paradox is greatly put. It deeply expresses the weakness and vulnerability felt through love.
The image you paint here is not lost on my imagination. Teachers are the embodiment of love, they come to us and ask for our shoes. Just so they can walk in them and see things from our very own perspective, thereby placing them in a position to help.
Love is this teacher. This is beautiful
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Interesting poem, very passionate. Thank you very talented.
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Keep your hands to this @dobartim
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thanks
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Nice lines and photography👍
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These words are quite awesome, your poetry is inspirational, keep sharing such posts, thankyou
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You are welcome
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Completely my pleasure
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This brings a lot of memory for me. snow shows the way to your lips with which magic words flow. thanks @dobartim for the reminder
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Very nice
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Great post. And how to get to know you ???
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Salute you Sir @dobartim
Love your poem
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A poem that thrills the heart of every reader, I am very inspired by the style of your words. What more poetry was directly from our steemit teacher dobartim
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When a man is in love hmm
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Great poet @dobartim.
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❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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poetry is very nice, I am amazed to read it ,, just this is a nice poetry that I have ever read
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beautiful love pictures :)
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beautifull poetry
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Good brother
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Very nice post @dobartim
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Very creative thinking @dobartim. I am amazed with the pictures and the writing that you share this. everyone has experienced a story like this one wrote even though it is not realized. Good luck @dobartim . Thank you for posting.
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Waow, i love every bit of it. You are gifted really. Thanks for sharing.
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Fascinating ballad, extremely enthusiastic. These words are very great, your verse is moving. with excellent love pictures
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love is mysterious. the more you try to find out. the deeper you are wasted in the caress of love.
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I am infinitely enamored with lexicon and the way "material mischief" rings in my head with so many ways the word michief can be read, the multiude of inflections it can be said and how each changes the essence of It's definition and expanding the meaning and the over all mood of the poem. Lovely!
I also really enjoy "ocean of paradise experiences" it sounds like fairy tales coming true :) Thank You @dobartim for sharing !
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Love is the ultimate teacher, through love we can determine the margin of our success, love burns the desire to do more even to go extra miles beyond expectations. We need love always from everyone here and hope we would achieve that. Thanks sir.
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Poetry that is in accordance with the conditions of today, the meaning is very deep. Hopefully can be an inspiration for many people.
Thanks @dobartim has shared. I hope you will write the next poetry.
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Wow! Amazing..😊
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awesome post boss
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Good post, I am a photographer, it passes for my blog and sees my content, I hope that it should be of your taste, you have my vote :D greetings
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Am dumbfounded to be sincere...you have a very close and flexible relationship with words
Nice one...i'm following you, please do well to visit my site as your criticism on my post will be of great encouragement
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Really nice post about love. They say love is like a river and a stream that has no end.
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In life, motivating yourself is hard, finding someone that motivate is hard. We have opportunity to choose our type of hard. When your motivation or passion to carry on is anchored on another individual, there is the benefit of sharing idea, knowledge and burden with that person.
No matter how independent you want to be, we all need to be loved and to love. It is privilege to find that someone very early in once life.
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Love is the greatest and worst of all in the Universe. It tears us into shattered Stars to make room for new life, to seed Divinity of the Eternal Flame that lives within us all.
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thi is beautiful, congratulations
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best and ever made post on pic and photography, @dobartim
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