Mystical Message

in poetry •  7 years ago 
  • Let's be on the branches of the new worlds, your message comes in the silence of magical sounds. Make a challenge in the life of dreams, try to win the discipline of defeat. Music swims in the new sounds of the sun, you remain consistent with the highest ideals of love.

  • Everyone wants fun and good company, time passes as we learn new tricks of existence. The heart changes the rhythm in the embrace of your passion, you are the front page of the artistic achievements that accompany me. Where we started, we are ending with a new start of our career.

  • Investments make a new change in the world of false manners. You are the judge of a gentle heart that smells of forgiveness, brings me knowledge from the source of living joy. Offers come from all sides, we choose money instead of inner happiness - where we are.

  • We change the day for romance, we cover our eyes with new ideas because we are left without the essence. Real power comes on the wings of strong winds, real help descends in the waves of love with cosmic colors. Wake up beside me, I want to see your face with smiling energy.


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@dobartim... This is really impressive... I love the part "Investments make a new change in the world of false manners. You are the judge of a gentle heart that smells of forgiveness, brings me knowledge from the source of living joy. Offers come from all sides, we choose money instead of inner happiness - where we are." It really explains what life really is to the business people and investors

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Thank you boss

Nice poetry with an amazing colorfull my dear friend @dobartim

Thank you for awesome words

Very beautiful poem my friend !

Thank you very much, have a nice and successful day my friend

I came here because of the photo, it looks so mesmerizing, is that a drawing? A photo? A body painting? Or just a photo which been photosoped?

I don't know

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Good morning sir.
Your poetry always gives motivation and such deep meanings help us think more.
Thanks a lot for your efforts.

We win only Together

Good morning, see you on the top

Perfect words. Reading between the lines, we will always understand the message you a're passing across. Great work sir!

Thank you very much

Another beautiful piece yet again

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Beautiful expression of the thoughts. I loved reading it. So well said... we are ending with a new start of our career..

See you on the top, we win together

beautiful poem. Thanks @dobartim for sharing

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Your post just gave me this strong thought "THE WORLD IS IN SHORT SUPPLY OF PROBLEM SOLVERS". Thanks @dobartim

Yiu are welcome

I'm not sure why, but Steemit is making me more of a poetry fan than I have ever been! Very honest, good stuff. Thanks!