Over The Limits Of Your Love

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)
  • Open thoughts seek new phenomena in the silence of impossible energies. I saw the distance of wild strawberries in the smell of your view, the water changed direction along the winds of your love. She woke up in the storm of new dreams, her passion rose along the firm clouds of new promises.

  • A smart idea brings stupid reasons in a success story, be a true leader in a sexual endeavor through an extazy movement in glass socks. Touch my imagination with the gentle truth and empathy of your soul - The bright night called new voices in our loneliness.

  • Happiness has fallen with rain through the magic dimension of your words, your lips surf the idyllic mountains through the new galctic roads. I can not forget your movements in the perfect harmony of our illusion - You are a crystal mirror in the dreams of my waterfalls.

  • Go back to the details of our consciousness, lift the limits of love to the pedestal of pure thoughts. Bring me on your wings to the far depths of my heart, you are the leader above the boundaries of material problems - Above the limits of your love, I see our relationship that brings peace in the soul.

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True relationship always bring peace in the soul but the luckiest one gets true relationship in their life.

hmmmmm. i guess that could be true...

We can not live without love, it relieves us of the hardships and hardships of life, enlightens our lives with a bright smile whenever we remember who are in our hearts, no matter how we try to hide this feeling or transcend it we can not because it stems from the inside

Wow,what a beautiful message you got,nice post.

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Hi there!

Feel free to use this photo for your next writing:

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All the best!

I like animation of picture..

Excellent

Thank you for sharing and starting this morning with such a beautiful Post @dobartim
Thank you . They are seeds for the soul and spirit. Namasté

Namaste

Beautiful poem with a matching animation. Poetry is one area I find interesting, but funny thing I can't write.

Thank you very much

The choice of GIF image blew my mind. It encompasses every emotion been passed in the poetry at the same. There is a lot more for me to learn about love, and this is just the actual manuscript that I need.
I can’t wait to read more of this because love is a beautiful thing.
Gracias

Thank you for kind words

Wow very beautiful animation picture, thanks for sharing @dobartim

You are welcome

Nice post

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Beautifull poetry dear I like it.

Thank you very much

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Aww... touching poem really topnotch.. Love the words applied and the befitting animation brings life to the write up. thanks for sharing

Thank you very much

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Vote for you...Very interesting picturea Mr. @dobartim. Because this post about love, I want to share you On of love never limit is our loves to our child.

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Great post. However, it would be better if each poem is put in separate lines and not lump together in a paragraph. All the same, I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up man.

Waktu masih lama.

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This hit me hard....A smart idea brings stupid reasons in a success story.

I always try to read between the line whenever I'm reading your poem.

A smart idea are actually the ones that sounds stupid but in the end, success is sure.

Go back to the details of our consciousness, lift the limits of love to the pedestal of pure thoughts.

Love has a way of making us lose ourselves, unconsciously though.

There are no limits to love except that which you set for yourselves.

Thanks for this piece,
You always make me rack my brains with your poems

Love has no limits, limits are all in our heads!

Love above the love

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Very beautiful, i like it @dobartim

@dobartim can you teach me how to write poems your write-ups are terrific

Woow amazing animation and a great poem..@dobartim

Man I had to read that like three times. I want some of what u smoking.
When you said " extazy movement in glass socks" did you mean to carefully execute foreplay without mucking up?

Wow, I love the Animated blue angel on the picture. You do have good content. Thanks for sharing.

Fantastic words from you. Can see you really understand love. I read the second point over and over again. It was so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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very poetic... I think you're a genius!!

Love this poetry 👍🏼 ❤️
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Wonderfully written. Those images are a matching to the poem. We are encouraged to write ours too.

Reminds me of the peaceful and pastoral dreams I have in the morning just before waking. Unsettling dreams usually occur just after falling asleep, as the mind processes the stress of the day. In the early morning, the work is done and the mind can play.

Unbelievable beautiful animation of picture.....

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that's great post ,very beautiful picture .

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A wonderful elementally inspired write, dobartim:)

This stanza stood the most to me ...
Go back to the details of our consciousness, lift the limits of love to the pedestal of pure thoughts. Bring me on your wings to the far depths of my heart, you are the leader above the boundaries of material problems - Above the limits of your love, I see our relationship that brings peace in the soul.

@dobartim this piece was such an engaging read, loved hearing it read earlier and a big fan of your ability to deviate from linear thinking and normal narratives to surprise the reader.

Similar to what your title lays out, I feel you heart moving in ways through these words that overcomes the limits of love. the limits of boundaries seem to melt away, taken off like a coat, you are crushing it here, good sir.

Thank you so much for sharing - will do my best to read more as we continue, trying my best to read as many pieces as I can.

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Always, in every day, your poetry is so beautiful poetry.