Smart Emotions

dobartim (83) in poetry • 7 years ago

We open our hearts in the rain of emotions, passion rules with the mind in the sea of information. Show your intentions in the virtual world of reality, open your maps on the table of destiny. We looked for a path that is more difficult to go, there lies the secret of a successful life.
I feel joy in the tears of sorrow, I feel the wind that brings a new colour of memory in the darkness of light. We pass through the mystical chances in the direction of the Vulcan of passion, opening a new dimension of honour to the pedestal of beauty.
Emotions dominate our decisions, we are the customers of the time that passes through the golden opportunity. We find secret deals and famous treasures in words of wisdom, we pass through magical roads as we watch princes and giants.
Blue horizons and sounds of nature attract the attention of the cosmos, open our eyes to the dreams of the Gods who bring us to change. Wisdom has accomplished its goal in your gentle beauty, you have become the queen of emotions on the throne of the future.

Original poetry written by @dobartim
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7 years ago by dobartim (83)

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juliawilliams (61) · 7 years ago

Wow sir your heart is full of supernatural original and splendid emotions always it turned into the masterpiece of poweric work and I love to read your expressions which directly derives from the bottom of your heart.
Love you dear sir.
Hare Krishna.

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Hare Krishna, see you on the top

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juliawilliams (61) · 7 years ago

Hare Krishna dear sir I upvoted you have you noticed.☺

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

We win together

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kantos (62) · 7 years ago (edited)

De este hermoso poema quiero resaltar las siguientes frases que llamaron mi atención:

La pasión gobierna con la mente en el mar de la información.

Buscamos un camino que es más difícil de recorrer

Las emociones dominan nuestras decisiones, Encontramos tratos secretos y tesoros famosos con palabras de sabiduría

Cada día aprendemos cosas nuevas, nacimos en blanco, y poco a poco nos forjamos un camino, con cada cosa que aprendemos nos trazamos un destino, y nos damos cuenta que cada día que aprendemos algo, podemos ver que nos falta mucho mas por aprender, a veces nos perdemos en ese mar de información. No todos los caminos son fáciles, pero estoy seguro que los mas difíciles traerán mejores recompensas. Debemos tratar de equilibrar nuestras emociones con nuestros pensamientos, para que juntas tomen las mejores decisiones, cada palabra, cada conocimiento nuevo es mucho mas valioso que el dinero. "El Conocimiento es poder". Si tenemos mas conocimientos, mas riquezas tendremos en la vida y si compartimos nuestro conocimiento, compartiremos grandes tesoros.

From this beautiful poem I want to highlight the following phrases that caught my attention:

Passion rules with the mind in the sea of information.

We're looking for a path that's harder to walk

Emotions dominate our decisions

We find secret deals and famous treasures with words of wisdom

Every day we learn new things, we are born in white, and little by little we forge a path for ourselves, with each thing we learn we trace a destiny for ourselves, and we realize that every day we learn something, we can see that we have much more to learn, sometimes we get lost in that sea of information.
Not all roads are easy, but I'm sure the hardest ones will bring better rewards.
We must try to balance our emotions with our thoughts, so that together they make the best decisions, every word, every new knowledge is much more valuable than money. "Knowledge is power".
If we have more knowledge, we will have more wealth in life and if we share our knowledge, we will share great treasures.

Again...

THANK YOU!

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Have a nice and successful day

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rajmehta3007 (52) · 7 years ago

That was really touching buddy... You are one heck of a writer..

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

I am glad you like it

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hash-tag (56) · 7 years ago

I HAVE BEEN FINDING LOVE IN FILTHY PLACES,
ALL THIS LIFE, I HAVE FOUGHT FOR RACES

NOW WHEN, MY ENDS COME, I HAVE STARTED TO EMBRACE
WHEN EMBRACED, I HAVE FOUND TREASURE
THIS LOVELY WORLD CALL IT GOD'S GRACE.

HAPPY WRITING

HASH-TAG

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Welcome to Steemit

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hash-tag (56) · 7 years ago

Thank you @dobartim.

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stephenpaul (54) · 7 years ago

Poetry is the best form of self expression.Very beautiful lines you have here,Sir.Quite a talent you've got

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

I am glad you like it

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hirshan (38) · 7 years ago

Dear your stroy is allways heart touching i like it

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Welcome to Steemit

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jonesey (43) · 7 years ago

Beautiful poetry! Upvoted and reblogged!

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Thank you

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therebotelife (61) · 7 years ago

Nice and lovely picture

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dobartim (83) · 7 years ago

Welcome to Steemit

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mghufroncholid31 (45) · 7 years ago

very interesting discourse that you describe in your poetry. I found a positive phenomenon behind the scenes. Battling with technological sophistication is a must-have for achieving happiness

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