Steemit School Poetry

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)
  • Your words trigger the power of my sleepy spirit, turning a new page of scientific phrases through a mirror of more consciousness. We fly on wings of emotion, somewhere in the distance I feel the peace that carries new waves of abstract love - I sit and I feel your truth in a cosmic trance.

  • Music passes through the history of my memories, the rivers of passion shed new chaos in the minds of different ideas. Bring my weaknesses to the cave of power, cover my illusion with the chakra of a love message. Teachers bring a new line in the charismatic discipline of an eclectic cycle.

  • You are a lighthouse that brings about the changes in the magical work of our memory, you are a light that lasts for a lifetime. I swim in poetry that brings a new wave of impossible combinations, listen to the new brand of our leader - @d-pend brought his heart to our school - this is a mission without end.

  • Be proud of your knowledge, your future breaks old mistakes on the waves of insanity of material imprisonment. With words breaking the toughest problems, we are a new movement that changes the old essence with the new idols of human freedom.


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I see creativity at it’s peak. You’re good at this. I’m basically doing my amateur poetry because I have been attending classes and I am knowing a lot of things I didn’t know before

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

Awesome poetry. I love how you phrase your words. Every single of it goes right through the readers heart.
Thanks once again @dobartim for sharing

wow!!!!what a great poet you are, talented and creative. Keep it up

Be proud of your knowledge, your future solves old mistakes on the wave of insanity from material imprisonment.
I really like this word.
thank you @dobartim

@dobartim, I always love the way you play with words, and the unique images you always use for your poetry. You must have a special website you get them from.

The first line of your poem got me thinking:

Your words trigger the power of my sleepy spirit

Is this a good thing or a bad omen? It seems "your words" as used there makes the other person sleepy!

Was that what you meant?

8.17% @pushup from @dobartim

nice post

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no sabía que también hacías poesía. Me gustó mucho

Awesome poetry here,, i will compose a poetry for the steemitschool

Very very good post.. i like you post..