Virtual Passion

in poetry •  7 years ago 
  • We invest time in digital shades, we buy codes while we drink coffee - we raise the level of the game while changing the consciousness. Freedom inspires us to change thoughts, the character has remained pure in the black fog - true love floats on the vitrual wind.

  • Culture raises the economy, your numbers bloom in your hands while the flowers smell on the silicon valley. I touched your body through the keyboard, I feel your digital body for which I paid the new currency - I break through a new level of relationship with you.

  • The song raised the clouds while feeling the rhythm of dance on rainy memories. The winner remains hidden in a distant mission of hidden emotions, the heart sank into the kingdom of fiery dreams - I find new roads that make me a fool.

  • I remember the scented fields and gentle kisses of nature, the wind carries my thoughts with the energy of the cosmos.
    The perfection of power in the beauty of life is so powerful a sense of happiness when we connect ourselves with universal energy .


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Nice poem man. No one has time to just go out and unwind anymore. We spend a lot of time in front of our computers and phones that we can't appreciate nature and its gifts.
Sometimes, I just go hiking, climb up a hill and be at one with nature. Up there, there's no worries about data connection speed and the likes. Just life in its raw and pure form

We need to make a balance in life between digital and natural

I recently saw a documentary in which, the main topic of discussion was Fermi paradox, I hope you know about it. They were assuming many things, why other highly developed and evolved species are not yet discovered. And, the one of the many theoretical answers was that they might have a better virtual reality technology that they do not want to explore the real one. It was really very disturbing.

I think they (aliens) know about DMT and other mind altering substances.

What a coincidence

The first stanza did it for me...
"We raise the level of the game while changing consciousness" and "freedom inspires us to change thoughts"
Indeed it's a refreshing feeling when u know the decision you want to take is solely your responsibility.. Freedom brings inner peace and joy. Always excited visiting ur blog.. 😁😁😁

Thank you very much for this kind words

I see something great in me through your poet.. The sound of it gives me a lasting joy of command just as the keyboard, mouse and cursor does to the computer with the required kind of output that it displays on the monitor. Keep the good work... I rep you sir

Yes, this is situation

wow...nice post dear..tnx for.sharing...

Thanks

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amazing @dobartim

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thanks for the information @spaminator

Wow this poetry is from the heart
Original works

Poetry is very in his words, you are good at convey something in the form of poetry, I envy you. hopefully I can be like you are a friend @dobartim

Thank you

It is extraordinary to combine poetic and digital in your writings. Your work will create a new kind of literature: it would be digital literature. Have a nice day

Have a nice day

You know we express ourselves so much online anyway. I wonder if one day we will be able to transfer into a computer.

Nice idea

You write poems artistically @dobartim. This is amazing, I wish i can write the same way you write. Continue to inspire newbies like me to write and post such beautiful poems. Steem on!

Try to write

Less fragrant for now, because the price of digital again decreases.hehe
I like your articles

Nice work keep it up
Please kindly upvote my recent post and make me to grow @dobartim

Love it. I hope you like mine 😁

good chit ! snaps fingers

As always you write fascinating things! Well done!

very nice and beautiful poem. I like this poem.