Wonderful Game

in poetry •  7 years ago 
  • Childhood passes through the silk fences of our memories, idols fall to the fields of river magic. Stars teach us through powerful silence, our stories touch the heart of other dimensions. The rain fell over the day of your night, your dance is magnificent.

  • Brilliant words emerge from the mouth of the winner, our paths pass through the crossroads of music. We obsess our body with time, our size falls into the water currents of mysticism. Weaknesses are walking along the neurons of the mission, we give hope to the wrong people in the right place.

  • We are raising clouds above the light borders, you are wise gymnastics at the source of happiness. Errors are charged with tears of knowledge, each move goes through the temptation of star waves. Desires are the source of emotions, touch me with your marvelous look.

  • The leaves call the wind, we are the creators of positive events in the world of abundance. Pioneers are sending new demands of lust, the harmony of mind and body is perfect for your art. Life is a game of fairy tales, kiss me in a new episode of imagination.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Nice poem
we often listen how can someone arrange beautiful word, how can every phrase make deep impression.
Then i tought that he has beautiful heart. With that he choose beautiful word cause he want make him a good person. He want to be himself .
so I want to comment with my word

clouds floating in the sky
formed a mountain of ideas and turned into a rain of knowledge
Then they infiltrate into soil and flowing to the sea of understanding
wheerever you take it you will get a lot
whenever you get you'll be powered
but you must know how to use it
if you use knowledge water for evil
you will be beast
if you make ita as light you will be wise
so use your brain and heart to apply it

See you on the top, excellent comment

Weaknesses are walking along the neurons of the mission, we give hope to the wrong people in the right place.

Yes, guilty as charged. Lol. It's time for me to break old patterns. The world will change when fear is no longer appetising. It's time to find the right people in the right place. Steem schools is giving this gift to us all. Thank you @dobartim.

Secret:
@tusharraina23

Secret words is @nikolina

Beautiful poetry, I had just come back and proceeded to read your poetry and it is just as unique as always
Secret word @tusharraina23

Secret friendship @queenerica :)

Oh lol 😅

Believe in yourself

We are raising clouds above the light borders, you are wise gymnastics at the source of happiness.

Once again a beautiful poetry from you, and the use of pictures is just awesome.

The secret word for today is @tusharraina23

Thanks a lot sir

We win only Together

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

See you on the class - make upvote or resteem

Do follow back @tushrraina

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

very beautiful poetry, @dobartim, so silent reading it, a picture of a good school steemit friends.😊

Thank you very much for nice words

I love this poem and the use of pictures. Great stuff from you @dobartim

Welcome to Steem Schools https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

Hoping to make poems that are this deep ♥

I believe in you, see you on live class https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

I am actually a member of this discord. But I don't really know the exact time of your live class. May I know, if you don't mind?

Nice post..

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@dobartim Very nice poetry and matching images. Loved your post.

Thank you very much, see you on the top and Steem Schools https://discord.gg/9Yb3AMR

good job... how do you find so much time... ;P

Thanks, practice

Charming ... A mysterious teacher and an innocent who learned in this magical game of life. thanks for sharing

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

You are always welcome, see you on the top

Me encanta como logra asociar todo ese cúmulo de oraciones para sacar una idea espectacular, en cada poema.

Hola, thank you very much

Just throwing this out there, I love your work. Never stop.

Thank you, see you on the top and make one poetry