๐Ÿ–ค Darkness Come To Light ๐Ÿ’— [Original Poem]

in poetry โ€ขย  8 years agoย 


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Late at night I went outside
No one to see, No one that eyed
It were as if
The noise had died
And someplace deep inside
I softly cried

With Darkness on my side
Shackles of constraint untied
Me and my thoughts at last, allied


My vision became weaker
Less and less were I to see
Yet my horizon came to be

It showed me the way
What I were to do this day
As the weight came to fade away

Piece of mind, Piece of heart
All this time were set apart
Listened to all but myself

Time be finally here
To disappear
And become what I
In truth endear

By Droucil

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ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

Piece of mind, Piece of heart
All this time were set apart
Listened to all but myself

NICE POETRY

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

ty :)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

creative poetry my friend :) i made this for you :) a little gift for you : )

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

That's pretty cool :D Ty!

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

your welcome :)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

good one

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

I too find that darkness has a big part to play in poetry something about pondering on th the dark makes for good poetry.

Thanks friend I enjoyed :]

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

:) I am a big fan of the darkness ^.^

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Me too it keeps showing up hehe

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย (edited)

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

:)

O my friend! You are so talented! Thanks for a piece of heart! ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿค—

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

thanks :) :)

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

Hard to say if ending is sad or happy. I'm torn.

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

aww :)

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

good poem

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Nice poem! You're a talented Writer.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thank you, and thank you for checking out my posts :)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Magical you are! Beautiful.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Wow omg this is a great poem <3 I love the last sentence especially "time be finally here- to become in truth what I endear" and the rhyming of each sentence each paragraph truly beautiful . :-) keep it up!

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thanks ;)

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Very nice reflection @droucil I enjoyed your poem

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

^.^

ย  ยท ย 8 years agoย 

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