Gliding down the rails
Sounds of ease and comfort
Of bliss to ears intone
A rhythmic trance evokes
Resonating mind with body
Awareness comes to light
Consciousness recalls
The inner soul connects
The illusion, becomes present
Inner Soul Resonating 🔅
Gliding down the rails
Sounds of ease and comfort
Of bliss to ears intone
A rhythmic trance evokes
Resonating mind with body
Awareness comes to light
Consciousness recalls
The inner soul connects
The illusion, becomes present
I like your poetry a lot...am I mistaken, but the word 'golves' - I'm a little lost on that?
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Thanks for noticing, it was actually a mistaken word.
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This poem is full of illustrations
not easy to understand
when black ink is inscribed
dark life struck the darkness
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a nice one!
I like the 2nd four lines the most, they awoke the brightest illusions)
why do you make to get inspiration? meditation or maybe music?
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Often music, the song in this post was in a loop for a while ^^
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nice poem.... i love to read poem✌✌
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one thing i love about poetry is that it speaks to the mind. good job dear. its realy a nice one
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You got me when I saw HM 2 picture
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Haha, good to know it helps for clickbait ;)
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excellent creativity,very good job
lovely music,i like it
thanks for sharing
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i reestemm youre post gl
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Grammar!,Grammar!! my first day on steemit and friend told me to follow you @droucil,for Al what I need (information, education,peoms etc) thanks for enlighten me on steemit.
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I’m diggin’ your poetry! The video was an added bonus!
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There is nothing of the simplicity, the feeling, the stirring of the heart, the accents, and the resonance that would move the most inner soul, not to mention possess the accompanying beauty to uplift the soul!
I like your poetry.
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Great plagiarism! Copy-pasting comments from the interwebs...
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Excellent creativity and nice poetry...
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9.79% @pushup from @droucil
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This post has received a 4.99 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @droucil.
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