Free verse is a rhythmic dance with voice and words, so be aware of the sequence of lines and follow along to see how one flows into the other.
It can help to read the poem aloud.
early in the morning
panacea
the smell of your hair
the swirl of our souls
transforming
to be with you
is a kind of heaven
How do you feel, having read the poem?
Can you picture the scene, and the emotion in these lines?
Please upvote, resteem, and comment below :)
What will we do with a drunken sailor?
Early in the morning...
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Haha! Hello sailor :D
Well spotted :)
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