Free verse is a rhythmic dance with voice and words, so be aware of the sequence of lines and follow along to see how one flows into the other.
It can help to read the poem aloud.
free with you
free with you
to the heart of the matter
in this sacred breath
the substance of our souls
the peril of my life
only moments rise
we feel the rhythm
in this sacred breath
you want me to touch you
discover yourself in me
you can feel it
as we're waking up
How do you feel, having read the poem?
Can you picture the scene, and the emotion in these lines?
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