Her eyes ...

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Today I want to share with you this beautiful poem wrote for my wife in our early relationship :)

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Her eyes are like two diamonds polished by time. With each second passed they become more shiny. When I look into them, everything around me vanishes. It's like looking to the starlit sky and seeing only two stars which have a meaning for you. And because of that meaning, the entire Universe is a special place for you.

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I like how you were able to focus on the eyes then bring other aspects like the starlit sky. Visually, it was kind of like panning out, like they do in the movies. It all made the metaphor of the universe hot a little harder. Good work.

Thank you!

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Hard not to appreciate the quality of the Photography :clap:

Nice!

Thank you @teddy7 !

beautiful eyes.

Thank you @topsnav :)

Nice

Thanks!