"OLD AGE PALL"

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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Age creeps into the cracks within her bones
Squint eyed she wonders where sight has flown
Heart beats faster as time slows a notch.
Strength all gone, life has become a crutch

Mouth smells sour as her teeth begins to fall.
Who said “Life began at forty “ had yet to see it pall
Shouted on by kinsmen with her ear aid on,
Hand led like a child, no more this world she long

Surrounded by dimwits who take her for a fool
But for her children she would have jumped into the back yard pool.
Legs, sight, taste gone, no fun from life derived
Alive but old, all pleasure from life deprived

Good friends passed to the great beyond
Death taunts does not to her pleas respond.
The more she pray for life yonder
More her heart rebels, beats on stronger

Age creep into the cracks beneath her bones
Who said "life began at forty "had yet to see it pall.

  • My Sweet Mama

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

❤️❤️❤️
I love this poem for so many reasons.

In my profession, I care for the elderly, so I have a special place in my heart for them. - I watch all the above daily become a reality, forming close bonds, wanting the break the chains that frailty brings the feeble.

personally, it takes me back in reflection to times with my own beautiful mother R.I.P . She had me late in life, so again I observed daily, prepared and uttered to my own self words of comfort,(alone, at night) the painful realism that one day I would need to cope without my best friend, it stabbed every time. Yet I did not realize how sharp the edge would be.

and finally. I appreciate the poetic aspect as I write too ❤️
Always reading other people's work for inspiration xxx
Thank you for the delicate words you brought to me tonight !

Thank you.

  • Sorry for your loss

I could not but cherish a 'Mother' poem.

I am appreciative that I stumbled across tonight.. thanking you!

I appreciate. Mothers are Priceless

👍 👍 👍

Thanks

Great poetry, keep posting ! :)

Thank you.

This ur poem is fantastic

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very good poem

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

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Ah my grandma too :(

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