TRUE GIRL

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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It is very difficult for me to love,
But I'm real!
Impossible in fact, perhaps,
tired of lies and nonsense,
very difficult to love, almost ...

I'm not obedient, I fight for three,
and in my feet, I cast down the worlds,
my eagles breed in my heart,
and every night I crash with winds ...

It is very difficult to understand,
as a book,
that you have to read again and again,
and every new word reveals you,
a lost, untouched world.

And the need to read and reread me,
is a need like air and water,
very difficult to love I am, it is true,
but the most real are the impossible!



Goodbye and Kisses ...

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This poem and your picture touched me soo hard...i want to meet you!

Ha ha Really ? :D

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

Thank you for your opinion.

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It's a very good poem.
It's hard to understand the rhythm because it's more like spoken word.
Your expressions seem to mean more than just what the words are.
Maybe it's something deeper.
Good work :)

Thank you @akrid for your support.
It`s hard to understand because is written in Bulgarian and i try to translate it but is not the same, sometimes poems fit nice after translate some time not.

congratulations for your poem..! It's nice..! Greetings from Venezuela..!

Thank you @manuelleorex
Greetings from Bulgaria

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

So you come with your other account to hate :) No problem mute for both.

No, it's good.

Lmao it's not. And she also thinks this is an alternative account of someone else LOL

That's weird.
Poetry is subjective either way.

It shows though that someone else appearantly also showed their dislike on her awful poetric attempts. Ofcourse it's subjective, but this is just nonsense.