RE: Do you remember some of your nursery poems???

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Do you remember some of your nursery poems???

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Im glad you liked my poem.
I would rather not rush to conclude on which is the correct one because i haven't gathered enough facts to back my claims

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Aye... I loved both versions. I think the message is well communicated in both versions

Yeah, i'm glad you loved it