And Here I Thought Poetry Was Boring
In these words you will find
The blood of martyrs crying for the end,
The declarations of a thousand
Men who aim to rule the world,
The feeling of being at the foot of
A mountain and scaling it cliffs,
The hand that held you from birth,
And the one you will let go of when you die.
They will spell out the loneliness
With each metaphor of the orphaned
And the childless parents,
The poor widows and the friendless kings.
The words will crash like waves
On the rocks and scatter about.
Tossing and turning you in your
Bed as you search for rest.
They speak of new love’s passions,
And the fallout of broken homes,
The snares of pure addiction,
And freedom’s constant enduring hope.
Here is where men have come to
Be bled dry and filled with rivers of wine,
Where women have given birth to their deaths
And even themselves from time to time.
Here is where sons have lost fathers
And wrestled with the dying of the light.
From knees bowing to feet kicking,
Fist flying, palms clapping, and heads shaking,
Here is where we have come when the
Moment, even a solitary one,
Becomes more than a solitary thing.
This is what you will find.
And here I thought Poetry was boring.
~Evan James~
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Beautiful I like it a lot.
It remembers me a quote from Federico Garcia Lorca
"At the heart of all great art is an essential melancholy"
And that's what I found in your poem.
Thanks...
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Thank you! Lorca is a wonderful writer. I speak a little Spanish myself and reading his stuff in its original tongue is both challenging and rewarding. I appreciate the comment
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I agree with you Lorca is a wonderful writer. He is one of those who has influenced my poetry. If you want you can read it(my poetry) in my account and we can share and talk about our poetry . Keep in touch! Saludos desde Venezuela!
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