The pictures only lessen the poem. I would use none or one. It does sound like a diary at some point instead of a poem. I like your theme though [liking people while hating to be around them].
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Thank you very much for the feedback. I appreciate it.
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Generally that's my theme. Poetry that doesn't sound like poetry, but you're right this one is particularly unpoetic, and could have done with far less pics since there's not a whole lot there.
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