I Call You Mum.

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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In the hands of a stranger I found peace.
In the midst of the chaos she cast a smile
when she saw me.

In the twinkle of an eye I became conscious.
Then I burst into tears,
wondering what I had done to deserve this.

I feel so blessed with you.
you loved me before you knew
if I was ugly or beautiful.

Many times I kicked and played
and it hurt like you would break
but you never wavered in your love for me.

You raised me up, wrapped your hands around me.
I watched the tears journey
down to your cheeks.

I felt amazing, and I cast a smile back
and the whole room went crazy
they were like “oh he smiled back”

Why won’t I? when I found love in your eyes.
After all the pain you went through,
you still found the heart to plant a kiss on me.

A kiss on me
but not a kiss only.
You deserve the world, all bills on me! ❤️


The International Women's Day is on the 8th of March, 2018. All posts on this account from now on will lead up to that day 😁

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Oh what a great poem. Am moved by your choice of words to describe my wife, your Mom. Anyway I'll wait to see words that will be released from your arsenal when you will be celebrating Daddies. You are greatly loved.

Your son is super talented especially with words sir. I'm rest assured that he would definitely do you proud on Father's day. You are so eloquent yourself sir, it's easy to see where he got his "gift of the gab" from!

Thanks @mosunomotunde for the compliments. Steemit family is such a wonderful family to belong.

you deserve the world, all bills on me.

Love this line.
Really lovely poem.

Nothing compares to the love of a mother.
I learnt to appreciate my mum more when i had my son.

The sacrifices a mother pays are unquantifiable.

Thursday will be a great day but beyond March 8, we will keep celebrating the legends in our mothers and all women that world over.

A poem for your mother and a flash back of your birth

You know, i used to ask myself "how can you love someone you've not seen or met"
I have the answer to my question now

A beautiful poem Fi. I'm so proud of you even though I probably have no right to be. You are proving to be one very well balanced man! Your poem for Mama speaks volumes of the kind of family man you'll be. God bless your Mum and Dad for gifting you to the world. Cheers!

You deserve the world, all bills on me! ❤️

Super proud of you @fisteganos

Thank you mama ☺️

There's reference in form of an allusion to the period before your birth hence- Many times I kicked and played
and it hurt like you would break
but you never wavered in your love for me.

Then to your birth period- In the twinkle of an eye I became conscious.

In the hands of a stranger I found peace - upon your entrance into the world, to you she was a stranger, but to her her little bundle of joy (without beards)

After all the pain you went through- the stress of pregnancy and the birthing process (Labour)

You deserve the world, all bills on me! ❤️- You will do all you can to make her happy.

Mothers♥️

You know there is a difference between a mother and a woman who just has children.
I have seen women abandon their kids and run after other rich men and those kids are left to suffer.
But, to mothers who are real loving mothers, they deserve the best.
Your Mum is beautiful, now I see where you got the cute smile from.

Your Mum is beautiful, now I see where you got the cute smile from.

😄🙈 😍

wipes tears.... That was beautiful.... She is beautiful...... Lemme go and call my mother...

Lol. 😁

A mother to be proud of,i can tell.
She is beautiful
Live on ma

This is beautiful. She is beautiful.
Nothing compares to the love of a mother
They love you without any bother
While others might be lost and wonder
Their hearts are always warm and grow fonder
They stick with you than a gf, yes even longer

Mothers are amazing. I miss mine.
Lovely poem brother. Always inspired by you.

Our fine mummy😍😍

😁 thank you, thank you.

Beautiful poem here @fisteganos. A true mother to showcase to the world. Proud son @fisteganos

❤❤❤

Ooo...this is lovely. Picking it up from where you stopped.

You deserve the world, all bills on me!
You're priceless, so I call you mother
If I could, I'll make you stay forever with me.

Its funny when you get mad at me
You acted as if you hated me, but no
You scolded sense into me until I became man enough

Sweet like honey
Your love stings my heart.
This is for the first woman who stole my heart.

Lovely poem for a lovely Mom, all mothers deserves such because they through a lot to raise us.
#steemsoccer1

Mother, the only day she smiled while you cried was when you were born, no love can ever replace the genuine and true love of a mother... Nice poem @fisteganos.. It is good to remember a priceless gem

There is nothing you can compare mother with,even to some level you can still compare father but mother is the best and first priority in someone life... I believe that mother is the small god of man. If you takecare of your mother very well, it means you are indirectly praying for yourself even if you dont go to mountain or fasting for days... I love this bro and pray for long life in sound and good health for her..

God bless the virtuous woman
The gentle soul that care
Showing the unending love that lies beyond supernatural...

Iya ni wura wa
Eni ti o toju wa lai ro ti inira

I join you to celebrate your mum today @fisteganos...

May her days be long and her eyes shall continually see goodness in the land of the living.

Wordplay, foreplay, well played!!! @fisteganos

Very cool poem! The incredible power of mother love to her child and unparalleled.. IMG-20170323-WA0001.jpg

Pretty mama you've got @fisteganous indeed not only a kiss. She deserve more than what words could express. My regards to your pretty mama. Someone's secret WCW smiles

So sweet, mothers are forever treasures to behold. Their love, so special...
God bless all mothers..
@fistenagos, you just made me remember and miss mine....

Mothers are amazing! And we can never forget them for all the sacrifices they have made for us!
I celebrate your mum with you!

Everyone loves momma

You deserve the world, all bills on me! 💟

Mothers are indeed priceless and precious, A Jewel to be cared for and appreciated, A Rare Gem that can't be found anywhere even among rubies...
The Mothers love very real @fisteganos

Awwwnnnn.....
So cute
Mums are Gold