If I do write you a poem,
then I might spill my tasty tea
and soil the ground on which I hope to walk.
Stars in the sky,
in the shape of a heart reaching for your touch.
The sands of the beach.
The music of each wave after wave, reminding me of several goodbyes.
The last one was always going to be the last one.
Until it wasn't.
But would you be a blessing?
My blessing?
Or maybe I'm only just in a hurry,
Chasing after something that'll turn around to hurt me.
Get a kick in the jaw cos I'm pretty unworthy
of your awesome sarcasm and your full scale playfulness.
I smile a lot, you do too.
We've got things in common even though I try to act faulty like Dtube.
But "Is it right?" is the question and not "Would it work?"
There's a spark, most likely derailing my train of thought.
I'm running into fences I built for my safety.
Trying to break them down like I'm screaming "Satan take me".
It's stupid and a lot more on the side of crazy
but it is what it is.
I don't even know why I write this
It must be all part of the madness.
The madness.
A curse?
The two syllabic end rhyme employed in this stanza gets me. It's beautiful how it rolls of the tongue, like the rendition of a song.
This is beautiful :)
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Thank you! It’s nice to see that you noticed and found a part of it that you love
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Beautifully carved out poece sir, i love this
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😂😂😂😂😂
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That's what you'll see. Lol.
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Some pretty deep expression in your poem... Really like it. Would be on your blog more often. Very well penned!
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Hahaha 😂😂😂
Dtube part got me 😀
Good one 👏
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Oh Fi @fisteganos didnt know you write poems too. This is awesome. Obviously you smile alot. Glad to have met you at the meet-up
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This poem looks like a great expression of the mind. Great one boss.
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Wow this post is listed in trending! Congrats.
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Choi silently subbing dtube, wehdone
The madness....not a curse, only a feeling that will also pass like stars in the sky
Im feeling it, permission to be inspired by the poem for reuse? Pls?
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Permission granted!
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haha, nice one boss 👌
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A highly expressive psychological write, fisteganos. Very nice work.
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And even when i call your name, there prove to be no answer.
For all i seek is not a curse, but a cause.
In my mouth your name is called,in deep reflection.
In my fingers mispelt with shame.
Even as i seek my cause, i look for my blessing.
And all through my work , blessing couldn't find me.
And even as i found favour in the eyes of people, their hands became too heavy for my blessing.
So i call unto @fisteganos(managing to spell rightly) and i say;
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This is such a touching message. Going all out with your emotions on this one, aren't you bud? :) I could feel the longingness radiate from every word. Great work with this!
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Yeah it came from a true place. I really appreciate this coming from you. Haha 😆
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As long as you bring the emotions, you're almost assured a wonderful output.
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Oh boy! This is...i don't know how to place it, battle of the mind? Sure has it's mixed feelings about it. Nicely composed brother!
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There are always more than one side to things in life. So yeah, mixed feelings. Certainty and uncertainty. They all work hand in hand
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Perfecto brother!
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This was a joy to read. Pleasing the depths of my mind, no deceit. Thanks. Now have a repeat.
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Lol. Nice rhymes.
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My word! This is deep and just a little dark. Baby you must come to church with me ooo! let me know if you need the services of an amateur shrink...I'm available at just 3sbd per hour grinning
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Haha! Mans fine 😁
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