Silly Free Write

in poetry •  6 years ago 

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Dawn to dusk, mankind is busy
Busy to bring something to the table
Table of men where others are seated
Seated because adults aren't matured
Matured in age, but age I guess is just a number

Number of people who go out and don't come back
Back to their families and loved ones
Once upon a time, life was easy
Easy as ABC until we came to the city
City life demanded more than we bargained for

For mama had to leave us home to join daddy
Daddy lost his job, and that's when life became stressful
Stressful mama was fighting with daddy all day
Day in and day out, I wish we would leave the city

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Upvote for your poetry! I like the imagery and emotion behind this.
If only leaving the city would solve all the problems.
Life is so complicated, and deep. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks for commenting

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I like the way you end one line and begin the next with the same word, creates a cadence.

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

Thank you. Was just lying down and thought I would try something new. Glad you like it.

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