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Pieces, broken
from a wounded yesterday.
Shards - still pierce the future
What interpretations can you draw for this haiku. I've placed a little bounty on the post as motivation. :P
A Haiku is a short Japanese Poem consisting of 3 lines.
Traditionally, Japanese haikus consist of 17 syllables, in three phrases of five, seven and five syllables respectively. Among contemporary poems Teikei (fixed form) haiku continue to use the 5-7-5 pattern while Jiyuritsu (free form) haiku do not.
This is a Jiyuritsu Haiku.
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i have always liked haiku for their simplicity. Its really the only poetry i can write lol.
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Yeah....they are quite simple but still powerful and impactful @masterroshi.
Thanks for stopping by
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i used to have pet fishes, gold fishes (Ryukins).. the aquarium got hit by a baseball from the neighborhood playground.
this haiku reminds me of that.. going home to find shards of broken glass and dead fishes.
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Ouch.
Pretty sad
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I just recently knew what a haiku is, and love to write, we songwriters must be I guess, but really did not know of them.
I think it means than once broken, even something mended carry scars, sharp edges, even fragments missing. And those scars we carry with us, they pierce through the future as reminder.
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Yes indeed. It can never go back to normal once it is broken.
Glad you know about haikus now @yidneth. Thank you for stopping by
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Curious thing is that I like their short intensity and I was already doing short poems of the sort for the sake of doing. But did not know of haikus themselves and rules of their metric syllabe count. So been reading a few also to get the gist of it.
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U r really a pro on this
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Thanks @driftyy
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A broken heart... I guess
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Yup, Something like that @fejiro.
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Nice post your good in this
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Thank you @engrbrain1
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Yeah Haikus are great ;)
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Wonderful haiku poem.
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I just found out through mentions about the bounty and reward, well, gee, thanks :)) I was unaware of that actually :) but I was happy to provide my interpretation :)
Thanks by the way!
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