Along this railway of life
My train of thoughts
Sends up smoky conclusions
To the heavens.
I mean smoky confusions.
If...
A question that burns my every thought to smoke.
If.
If Mecury was our planet and not a liquid in Chemistry
If I were to be a girl and not a boy
If I were to love dolls and not toys
If there was no God to rule and law was free to be.
If there was no life
If there exist no death
If the clouds were blue and the Sun white
If knowledge I knew with every sight
If sand were gold
If gold were stone
If tears were honey
We shed when we're horny
If...
If...
I'm cursed to walk down the aisle with Questions for a bride
Doubt for the minister
Confusion for my Best Man
And fear for a compass.
One day, I know
That one day
One way or another
Order will ride this brother
Who writes to you his bothers.
One day, his train will arrive at his station
And there to welcome him home
Will be all the answers
To his life's search
To his IFs.
-Godwine
Absolutely beautiful!
I can't wait for you to post more of your work @godwine :D
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Thank you for reading...means a lot to me.
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It was my pleasure ^^
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very good, I like flow of consciousness
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Love that name!
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it. This means alot to me.
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Very well composed and rhymed in perfection. good job and carry on.... following you buddy.
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I really appreciate your comment. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for the upvote and follow.
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Infinite striving to be the best is man's duty; it is its own reward. Everything else is in God's hands.
- Mahatma Gandhi
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I couldn't agree more...
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lovely piece
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Thanks.
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A case of the OMG's!!! My gooness brother, I have to say I am taken back by your finesse. This rhyme was right on time! I have read a lot of poetry on hefe but the is definitely some of the best. I will be following you brodi, keep it up. GodBless & Godspeed
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By the way I see you are new, do you know how to use the boosters? By sending 1sbd to https://www.minnowbooster.net you get them to upvote you with crazy up power and you'll make way more money. I just learned about it and its turning this hobby into a day job. There are lots of articles on using the boosters and many to choose from. Some pay more than others. Minnow booster typically returns 3sbd for me on a 1sbd deposit. You can send more but I notice it doesnt really help a ton. Need any help just holler
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What up bro!? Hey i'm doing this new things where I send new members 1sbd through minnowbooster to help them get started and I really like your work. I was going to up vote the piece that you tagged on my blog but it is already 7 days old and minnowbooster is most efficient within the first day or two. If you want to copy and paste that same piece into a new post and let me know I'll send ya some sbd on it. It truly is one of the best pieces of poetry I have read on here yet.
@Grandpooba Loves To Give Away Money To "Striving" Artists, If you have art you would like to share please feel free to tag your url in any of my posts.
I am just getting started but I hope to be able to up vote 1 person a day though minnowbooster with 1 sbd. Once boosted that can be a lot more depending on popularity and other things. Normally 1 sbd put through minnowbooster will yield me 3 sbd though so that is a ballpark. Hope to see some of your works soon.
GodBless & Godspeed
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