A service for those who really aren't that spoiled
Image by Nattanan KanchanapratOf importance for those now without.
The oglers and holders of value,
Sprinkling droppings and leavings about.
Raucous and riled, Raise a crowd!
Gone but still growing like Giffen.
Too high! Make Them Pay! Get Them Out!
Image by bedrckMaking no waves on the shore.
No top-hats or monocled tyrants,
In the steak houses filled just next door.
Your Lambo is waiting out back.
Don't worry, I know that he's faking,
He's got all that he needs in that pack.
I enjoyed the crisp and unfaltering language of this piece. The snapping final line was a great way to end it. Nice write.
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Thanks! I appreciate the pithy review. Something along the lines of “snapping” is what I was aiming for so I’m very much warmed by your kind words.
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very nice post, keep it up. make sure to check my art page too. artists need to come together on this platform to make a very big impact.
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Yes, artists do need to come together which means actually reading other people's work and leaving meaningful comments instead of the same ting every time.
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