Celah Rusukmu

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hadirmu,
Tanpa mimpi bertemu kumbang..
Bertemu denganmu,
Tanpa berfikir takdir tuhan..
Dalam satu Cinta,
Aku ingin menjadi seseorang yang selalu tertulis di celah rusukmu.

Aku mengembara di negeri ini,
Tapi tidak bisa berpaling..
Dalam termangu pun.,
Aku masih menyebut namamu,..

Aku manusia..
Rindu rupa,
Rindu rasa,
Dimanapun engkau berada,
Aku menantimu dengan bulan penuh rindu..

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Puisi yang sangat indah, dengan susunan kata yang sangat luar biasa'..

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Terima kasih atas pujiannya...
    Saya pun tak bisa berkata kata lagi.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    so sweet...! Sebuah kerinduan yang begitu lama terpendam, mudah2an penantianmu berujung dengan pertemuan. Oh...

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Pujiannya terlalu berlebihan...
    Tapi terima kasih banyak atas doanya...

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Dalam sekali kata-kata dalam puisi ini,,,
    Enak dan mudah di pahami.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Terima kasih neng Lisa..
    Teruslah berkarya dan belajar..

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Puisinya aduhai sekali, nyaris tak dapat berkata-kata, pangling dibuat oleh kalimat dan bahasa didalamnya. Nice post bg @husaini

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Terima kasih banyak kawan,
      Teruslah berkarya dengan hasil yang lebih baik.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Wau puisi yang sangat bagus dan fotonyapun sangat cocok dengan kata-kata puisinya,
      @husaini

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Terima kasih atas pujiannya...
        Semoga harimu tetap menyenangkan...

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          ·  7 years ago 

        sebuah puisi kerinduan yang begitu mendalam semoga cepat bertemu dengan nya @husaini

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Amin... terima kasih banyak atas pujian dan doanya..
          Semoga kamu juga bisa berkarya lebih baik lagi.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Semakin puitis, sang ka menekuni puisi @husaini?

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Ha-ha-ha...Hana bg...
            Cuma tuleh -tuleh..
            Leh pu yang ka lon tuleh...

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              ·  7 years ago 

            So sweet x puisi bang @husaini..
            Ud jadi penulis yang profesional ..
            Terus menjadi penulis yang baik

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Do'ain ya...
              Moga menjadi yang terbaik....
              Teruslah berkarya...

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Puisi yang sangat menyentuh dan so amazing bg

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Terima kasih banyak atas pujianny...
                Teruslah berkarya ya...

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