Longing for the deceased father and mother unlimited by distance and time #Original Real Poem

in poetry •  8 years ago 

Dear my lovely Steemians,

I dedicate this poem to loving parents who have died

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Mother ...
Father...
Departure leaves pain
Leaving a lasting longing
Unable to withstand it felt this tightness

you are irreplaceable by anyone
you are the sun shining
dew soothing
and like water quench your thirst

father...
mother...
God has called you to face so fast
mother a year away
dad was followed into the wild there

Mother...
father...
My deepest longings can only pray the prayer
hopefully there is always peace in nature

Now without you
I feel empty
nobody shining today
only emptiness makes me deepened
and trapped in sorrow

I hope you enjoy my posts here and I'll show other things is certainly more appealing more to come

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      ·  8 years ago 

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        ·  8 years ago 

      good job @irawandedy

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          ·  8 years ago 

        teurimong geunaseh @cekmust

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            ·  8 years ago 

          nice post friend

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              ·  8 years ago 

            Thank You @steemgold, you're the best

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                ·  8 years ago 

              nice poetry @irawandedy

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                  ·  8 years ago 

                teurimoeng geunaseh @silvia. kiban cara ta pakek polonyx

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                    ·  8 years ago 

                  great job

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                      ·  8 years ago 

                    Syukran @lucki9

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                        ·  8 years ago 

                      Congrats, @irawandedy! The content is useful, thanks!

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                          ·  8 years ago 

                        Thank you @corvuscoraxx

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