Fifield:
Look, I'm just a geologist. I like rocks. I love rocks! Now, it's clear you two don't give a shit about rocks... ---PROMETHEUS 2012
On a hilltop, a grayish-orange horizon engulfing the land,
I could barely see peeking the light above,
the ominous turf conceals the mist,
My feet stand on a boulder, drench, where I met
Igneous, Metamorphic and Sedimentary rock,
the cradle of their birth, riddled with cryptic epistle.
How the world stands aground and afloat?
How statuesque are their expanse unveil?
The grandiose formation exemplify its beauty,
an echoing color reflects from the sun,
but the graze etched in its form,
venture can be notably perilous,
it breaths peril imperceptible to its grandness.
My soul doth magnify The Rock,
a gentle, meek, amiable Jah,
even the sole of footing rest in Him
unharmed, unveiling the sanctuary of oneness.
As formidable as the mountain,
My foot will not be dashed by a stone,
how lovely is Thy soul and my Rock!
Sampaloc, Manila
September 24, 2017
Photo Credit; https://pixabay.com/en/beach-coast-stones-rock-sea-water-192981/
Excellent composition, kuya! Parang re-birth lang! Mala science na may pagkamystic ang peg!
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Halos close sa mystic pero hindi ehehe... Thanks Jerryl!
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Reading your poem, I found myself near these rocks, sitting peacefully.
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I feel the same way sir siddartha!
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Superb poetry @iwrite! I love the flow, it says it all!
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hayun o, diosarich! thanks diosarich!
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Nose bleed ako Ahhhaa
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hayun o... heto naman nakatutula naman u! ehehehe
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Wow! This is amazing tito. Para sa akin ba to? Chos! Haha. I loved it. Great work! Upvoted and resteemed.
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Naalala mo noong nag-usap tayo about Prometheus... Biglang naisip ko about rock. Since ikaw lang ang-nag-aaral bilang soon to be geologis (I love rocks), hayan na ang tula para sa iyo mam! ehehehe... Weee...
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I'm touched sir. It's gonna make me cry. Thank you so much po, tito!
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Always my pleasure, krizia. There there...
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How majestic Thy creation is!!
The earth couldn't stand without this...
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It's hard to fathom a world without rock!?
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Unfathomable beyond compare... hahaha :D
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@iwrite, Beautiful, simply beautiful. I felt like I was walking barefoot on the rock, It makes us stop and take notice of stones that too often lay unnoticed as we walk on by.
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I like the scenery when I wrote the first line, it's vivid, the feeling, the excitement, everything in it. Thanks for dropping by mrs.digitalgold
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Bravo! Always magaling to make a poem.
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Thanks mam theree2389! Nakatsamba na naman muli!
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this poem is full of sense and feeling.
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Thanks bobiecayao!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks rehmanosama!
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Hi can you follow me and vote my posts and articles and i will do the same for you :) Thank you
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Hey... You shouldn't be doing that. Create a good post then we will see about that. Thanks.
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never knew rocks had so many names, well I knew of some and there are really some beautiful ones
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ay ehehhe hayan mam daisy! Thanks!
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Yan na naman tayo kuya eh. Pinapahirapan mo ko eh.
Hands down lang talaga ako kuya. Hehe.
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Hayun o... Ganda na ng mga tula mo sir!
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Di ko mapapantayan tula mo sir. Hehe.
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sir ehehehe it's not about pantay it's about your content... ang form mo sige kaunting hugot pa.. at yayabong ka na sir... nariyan ka na sa pintuan ng mga poet na batikan... puwede mo na siyang ihanay later on...
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Thank you sir! That's encouraging!
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Amazing composition yet again. Teach me master 😁
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Thanks again enjieneer!
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Galing magcompose talaga sir nice :)
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malay mo sir ikaw naman ang tutula!
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My home area happens to have very big boulders. You will love it here
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I wish I could come to your place, stbrians... somehow... I can't...
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whoaa nosebleed. beautiful poem
Eto kuya naka landing na may jetlag pa.
hope all is well.
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Hayun o! Nabusy na u mam. Thanks sunnylife!
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