The Rippling Exigent

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I intoxicatedly howled  deleteriously the day you cast down my ardor,
it begets an harrowingly futile throbbing of joyful bitterness,
dredge with dust of unsavory flakes, I grated relentlessly mine asininity,
in bits I infused a cold cuts of love, I live profoundly distress, sleeping.


San Mateo, Rizal
October 10, 2017


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      ·  7 years ago 

    Why is this so full of hurt? xD
    Nevertheless, keep on living...

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        ·  7 years ago 

      When it hurts... Does it mean I care? I mean the character in the poem....

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          ·  7 years ago 

        It's either you care... or you're being selfish.. HAHAHA xD

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Hayun o! Thanks tegoshei!

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              ·  7 years ago 

            np sir.. ^^

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                ·  7 years ago 

              Hmmm sounds like food... cold cuts hehe but seems angry

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Sounds like... pero between the lines lies the... Lol! Secret! Thanks mam purpledaisy57!

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Na-nosebleed po ako sir hehe pero ang ganda po ng poetry niyo promise!

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Ay mam... makakagawa ka rin nito... Malapit na! Thanks emdesan!

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      yup, me too @jovema..

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Makakagawa ka rin mam jhiecortez... in the future...

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Ang galling niyo po pala sir tumula. Nosebleed. haha

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Ay salamat mam ishteldalos... E, baka nakatsamba lang ako mam... Maikli tula ko mam... kahit busy, e, tumula na rin.

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                                ·  7 years ago 

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Nosebleed ako hahah

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  naman mam... kaya mo rin ito... thanks enjieneer!

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    dumugo yung ilong ko sir haha

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Ay wag sir! Naman... Mahirap iyan... Basa lang mahiwatigan mo lang tula naroon na iyon ang sustansiya niyan...

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Ehhh... nakakanosebleed sir john. Bwahaha

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          Wahahahaha... Naku pati ba ikaw mam shane? hayun o!

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            oo naman sir john ang layo ng pagkakaintindi ko. hehe

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              a food is talking about i love to eat always hungry =D

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                I recommend sir neil to dissect again this simple poem... hayun o!

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  i just wish i can write beautiful poetry as this is.

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    Yes you can write... In time... Just start with simple poem...

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      Thank you very much indeed!

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        You are welcome hodorhodor!

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          Mukhang stress ka, kuya. Ganun pa man, nakapagsulat ka pa din ng magandang maganda. Chill!

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Hehehe halata ba Jerryl?! Thanks bloghound!

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              pengeng tissue nosebleed, anlupet sir :)

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                whahahaha ano ba iyan sir julsamban! hayun o! thanks julstamban!

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  Galing talaga sir. Hehe

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      Sorry nahuli ako sa pag visit..flakes,medyo na intindihan ko to.

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        wahahahaha... okay lang sir bo!

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                                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                                          This post has received a 1.04 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.

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                                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                                            Nice poem :)

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                                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                                              thanks thatindianlady!

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                                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                Nainspire ako sa mga poetry mo sir kea i am trying to be like you po

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                                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                                  salamat ng marami syd30!

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