The Unmoving Nomad

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)


That pureness of delicateness afloat into the unfamiliar realm.
The tender facade is a pitch black of warm life,
a muted lonesome silenced the weak fated soul?

A fragile innocence of wholeness creates a naked newness in a loop,
an expanse covered with an accrual anticipation of surety,
albiet to endure the sever strain struggle furiously, irritably,  
gradually, you were forcefully obliged to slid in out of breath.

Deemed it doomed a conflict emerged sharply,
it weakened the frail receptacle dearly,
the unbroken drain loosely, unendingly,
enduringly the miracle of glimpse ceased to seek!

Afflicted,  as the harrow uplifted, the groaning resounds,
cordially detested the enduring adversity,
the burden weigh even dully,
desperately mutter a racking plea,
abdicated, decrepit, solemnly I bow.

San Mateo, Rizal
September 1, 2017

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ang lalim grabeh naman. hehe. congrats for this amazing massterpiece again!

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Magaling ka talaga kuya.

ay sir iyan iyanpol12! e, ewan nagkataon lang siguro iyan...

I really got a lot to learn from you especially in terms of poetry, sir @iwrite... ^^ Love the imagery!^^ The beauty of life...

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Wow..ang lalim!

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masha ALLAH.. hoe cute is the baby and how cute is the poem. A real love story.

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Life is beautiful. :D

Indeed ate zararina!

So deep, my imagination is being tested.

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I really love reading your poems, the use of rhyming techniques and the used meaningful words..awesome @iwrite . Thanks for sharing.

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Great poem once again sir @iwrite

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hayun o! you are most welcome quel!

Nice mine are simple spur of the moment poetry

Every poem has its unique line... You'll have yours, Daisy...

Sometimes, it ios so damn hard to dig deep unto your emotions.....ang lalim kuya :D but I am hoping I get the message :) Beauiful!

The emotion is there... Need to simple look close... Naks...

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Great. Thanks for sharing. I'm starting to follow you.

Thanks capari! I'll do the same!

This post makes me want to post the poem I wrote too. Nice one! hehe

Tell me when you finish the poem, I'll read it! Thanks enjieneer!

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ay mam sunnylife! Thanks!