Unfathomable Senses Of Love

in poetry •  7 years ago 

When we touches hands affections affects our senses,
our eyes glowing like neon signs in the red district,
crumbling belly felt like soaring butterfly,
hands sweating and bodies become one,
above normal decibel rumbling  and echoing harmoniously,
the aroma of your breath is like unto roasted and pounded young rice,
how majestically these lucidity are!

I live in within your body as you move inadvertently,
you are my extension of my becoming,
my manhood is as your womanhood,
we carry our uniqueness exceedingly,
I have with you within our boundaries.

To keep you exquisite outside, I have known you inside that I cherished,
I beheld your crown of virtuous soul with gladness,
whose heart is not as deceitful as whore!

What better adornment would be to earn than to be with you,
as you have lighten the dwelling place of peace,
I abode in your calmness unequivocally,
as you rested your affection in my essence.

Our content is full.
Like water that cleanses our soles,
so our defects is perfectly normal,
we bind with pure love ours to impute it.

How comforting to be born of broad liken unto you,
shall I embrace your gentleness,
shall I cover my face with your veil of meekness?
Who can merry my soul except you!

Strange woman conceal deceit,
your heart is as open book to look upon with fondness,
brings a river of gaiety, I soaked with glee!

I remember the day you poured out your spirit on me,
I gazed a luminous silhouette of faith,
formless have I believed for everlasting!

Ours is not a perfect zest,
building bridges of true relish slowly fixing,
together we are firmly crossing the tough journey!

Pure and clean fidelity honor the weakened heart,
of bold pretentious harsh wisdom distort intelligently,
whose mind do the person bear with contempt,
to set the bearing of foolish being!

Your head of righteousness brings glory to my head,
as the sun live! Yet your grace surpasses my marrow.
How long shall I breath your passion of love?



Sampaloc, Manila
December 11, 2017


Photo is mine.



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Wow sir very nice

hayun o. tnx purple daisy

Nice poem and a pure white bougainvilla. Thanks for sharing Sir John

Very poetic Mr. John.

Thanks steemit-again!

Nosebleed sir. Hahaha

Lol! Katamtaman lang itong tula sir! Thanks iyanpol12!

What a beautiful poem. I can picture it in my mind. The flow is so wonderful! Well done, kuya :)

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Love is in the air!

Ganda sir, lalo na to.

Ours is not a perfect zest,
building bridges of true relish slowly fixing,
together we are firmly crossing the tough journey!

Oo... Nariyan ang isa sa elements ng isang journey.. Thanks bobiecayao!

Sir... natawa ako sa first three stanza... yung second meaning naiisip q.. kasalanan ng "Red District".. hahaha :P

Nevertheless, the passion and romanticism is there!!! Yay~!!! ^^

Lol! Tego! Alam kong kapag ikaw ang magcritique laging may kakaibang lumalabas... Lol... Naman... Bigla mo namang napangiti ako doon... Nilagyan ko lang ng parang kakaiba... Pero somehow parang may "implication"na wala naman talaga.. Weee! Thanks tegoshei!

parang may "implication"na wala naman talaga..

Hahahahaha... peace po sir @iwrite!!! :P okay nga yun sir ehh.. ^^ poetry is an abstract painting in a lexical form... ^^

Tsk... Lalong naging complicated ang comment mo! Hahahahaha... Pero creative pa rin! Lol!

Hahahaha.... sorry naman!!! ^_^

it has everything... awesome!

It is so nice sir

wow sir sobrang lalim...ndi na ako nosebleed dito..internal hemorrhage na bwhahaha...seriously po, super sir ang ganda :-)

Lovelt poem. cool! :)

Nakakainit sa taglamig sir nung pagkabasa ko ng mga unang linya :D :D