Your Battle is My Battle (A Short Poetry)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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You look at me like you want to stay,
But your outer being says otherwise.
Bowed my head down and pray,
Your victory is such a prize.

I am hopeful, but in self-denial,
The longing for your strength renewed.
With this supplication, indeed essential,
I need endurance as I felt subdued.

Please listen to my petition,
Never surrender in your struggle.
Hope my presence cause alleviation,
Because your battle is my battle.


We might get stuck in a situation which someone we love is in a struggle. They are in this battle which they might feel they are alone. Only them can really feel the difficulty. But if only we can take those causing them afflictions, we would. But things may seem unfair. All we can do is show our love to that person. Make our presence strengthens them. Make them feel they are not alone in their battle, until they become triumphant.


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Every single day, we go through many challenges and sometimes all you need is a tap on your shoulder and comforting voice saying "all will be well"
However hard your situation is, someone out there has been through it or had it worse.
I take it day by day and so far, all is good.

Nice Poem, you just got a new follower @ruzindana

Thank you for those thoughts. :)

Beautiful words. Beautiful message. At this very moment, I am facing tough times myself :(

Thanks po ate. Musta na po kayo? Sana okay lang po kayo.

nice poem @iyanpol?
ikaw ba ung kababayan ko na taga pangasinan?

On. Siak iman. Hehe.

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Ninonot ko met naniman no sikayo man. Hehe. Manaya, join kayo ed discord pian mas naexpose so blogs yo.
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o sege gawaen ko naani, salamat ya baleg kabaleyan. merry xmas ed sika tan jad pamilyam

Salamat ed sikayo.

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Very nice poetry.... Thanks for share it. great title. lovely word.