The Beast You Don't See - Jacobite's Show's (Poetry: Day 12)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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What lay underneath this cloak of beauty?
Bruises and scars.
By the hands of whom I called my sweetheart,
I have been battered heartlessly.

What lay behind my glassy white eyes?
Fears and regrets.
Behind the shadows of the night,
I have wept and poured out my heart.

What lay behind my brisk fragile heart?
Pain and sorrow.
Days turned into nights, nights into weeks;
My tender heart now stiffens.

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What lay underneath this cloak of beauty?
Hatred and Revenge!!!
I crave to strangle out the life off my sweetheart;
The one who taught me, every beauty has a beast!!!


PROLOGUE

This piece portrays the bitterness of a damsel unleashing her yearn for vengeance...

This piece of poetry was inspired by my friend's work ( @anggreklestari) :- Bilingual Poetry: Beauty Is A Wound

Kindly support her by checking out her blog and dropping your comments.

Reader's Note:

This poetry is to satisfy a personal urge.
Please pardon errors found, if any.
I basically just fit into a beginner level



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Nice work @jacobite

Thanks fam

Beautiful picture with a nice writing @jacobite. You made an amazing content, We sould connect and support each other by follow each other. I already upvoted you and following you, please think about that.Thanks and greeting from @chanthasam

Thanks for the comment bro.

I will check out your blog out.

A broken heart. A wounded man?

PROLOGUE
This piece portrays the bitterness of a damsel unleashing her yearn for vengeance...

Its about a girl actually

Who are your influences?

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Her lover...

Except if I'm getting the questions wrong

@jacobite,i never knew you do poetry too..this is nice

I do poetry too, though on a personal level.

I find it as a better medium to express my feelings and sometimes imagination.

Thanks for the comment bro

Because every beauty as a beast. Nice twist here.

Thank you so much for dropping my name in your poetry. I'm happy to be your friend, ever!

Thanks alot...

I'm glad to be your friend too.
Do have a great day ahead.