RE: Runaway Rhymes 6: Worst day

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Runaway Rhymes 6: Worst day

in poetry •  8 years ago 

You've got the rhyming down. Are you trying to achieve any specific meter? The rhythm still feels a bit off, and the lines don't have the same syllable count. If this was your intention, disregard my comment. I'm no poetry expert. But I can say that maintaining an even rhythm to the rhymes is often harder than the rhyming itself.

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      ·  8 years ago 

    Hello, actually I was experimenting with ABAB rhyme a bit. It was pretty difficult to achieve it: at the cost of lines without same syllable count. Hopefully I will be able to make it better in the future.
    Thanks for your comment! :-)

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