(This is ME) Saying it LIKE IT IS! - Poetry/Lyrical MASHUP! :)

in poetry •  6 years ago  (edited)

So, I decided to have a little fun tonight...
Most of you already know that I am a huge music fan.
I am also a great lover of the written word,
and expression in general.

So, I decided to do a little bit of a
lyrical poetry "mashup"...
relevant to my current thoughts,
and compliments of just a few of my
favourite tracks.

Some words theirs, some mine...

Hope you enjoy it :)

(This is ME) Saying it LIKE IT IS!

......

Oh,

It's a frightening night,
and the wind has a roar
It seeps through the hall,
and from under the door.
It’s a a 21st century lesson
In the obsession for more.

Like the shit that was said
don’t take it that well,
No matter for thought
I will turn my head.

Sucker love is heaven sent
You pucker up our passion's spent
My hearts a tart, your body's rent
My body's broken yours is bent,
tit for tat, it was all lent.

Oh,

you don't mean nothing at all to me.
You either stand or you fall,
When your will is broken,
When it slips from your hand,
When there's no time for joking,
and there's a hole in the plan,

it's time to pull the rope in...
Let’s add it up for choking!

One, don't pick up the phone,
You know he's only calling 'cause he's drunk and alone!
Two, don't let him in,
You'll have to kick him out again!
Should we look at the rest
Because three times is a test…

Oh,

Mark my words,

Wanting you
was the worst thing
I could do,

I threw my hands in the air,
said show me something,
Round and around we go…

I will never be your stepping stone
Take it all or leave me alone
I'm standing upright on my own.

I can feel something inside me say
I really don't think you're strong enough.
I know that I'll get through this
'Cause I know that I am strong.

I've got thick skin and an elastic heart
I know that I can survive
I walked through fire to save my life.
I won't just survive...

Oh,

you will see me thrive!

This is no mistake, no accident
When you think the final nail is in, think again
Don't be surprised,
I will still rise!

......

These are the tracks that built this mashup :)

In order of lyrical compilation

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Until next time...
Much Love from Cape Town, South Africa xxx

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I would love to see you sing this version of your song??

lol NO ways! ;)

Why?? You'd do great.

Interesting poem. There's a punch that it delivers because it is relatable.
I haven't heard some of these songs. Might give it a go.

Thanks @leeart :)

lyrics pretty good words, when you separate from music could find the beauty.

Thanks :)

A nice piece of motivational words

Thank you @abmakko :)

Wow what a cool mashup. Would love it if you sang it too. There are great musicians in the @steemitbloggers community so if you could collaborate with them and turn it into a song, that'd be so cool!

haha thanks @sharoonyasir.... and thats not a bad idea at all!! :)

This is so amazing. Well done on getting it to flow so well together. I've been wanting to do something similar for a while but have just not got round to it. So happy to see how awesome it can be 🤩 xxx.

hehe thanks hon :)

Really deep and it's truly reflecting as these words are backed with some deep experiences and literally reflecting that you wrote this really heart out. And i always write, so i know, writing is really important to throwout our emotions and to feel lite once again. Thanks for sharing and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂

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Gosh... must be a handfuls trying to mashup 10 songs into one...
You are my idol! Hehehe

hahahahaha xxxxx it was a little challenging, but fun nonetheless :)

Still can't imagine... lol

Nice Lyrics! Hope You would sing it and Share it with us too! :)

Really deep, keep going!

Really insightful words. I'll really love to hear you sing.